Posted on 2022-06-18 16:12:32
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Hello, my friends! Here is the next page in the AU Club Spiral series made by the great artist Wadevezecha David may have been taken aback at Ami's seductive actions, but there still is one test left David needed to make sure worked. What test is that? Well, it's called, the 'The Trance Trigger' test. While I do love having the girls keep most of their original personalities, there are times when we want to see them all in their mindless trances. So I came up with the idea that all the store owners have these 'tiggers' for their slaves that put the girls back into mindless obedient trances. And David just pressed the button, with the device making a 'Ping-Ping' sound? Will this test work? Tune in next time to find out.

I really do love this aspect of the story. Someone asked me last night why someone from a world where Mind Control is the norm is so shy and reserved when it comes to the girls? The reason why are that in David's world, your desirable status comes from the fact of how powerful in magic you are. Tech Controllers like David aren't seen as desirable since magic can be passed down from generation to generation. David himself has no magical talent in spite of his family being so powerful in that field. His mother Anna is even regarded as being one of the most powerful sorceresses in their world. But like all good mothers, she loves her son since he is a living representation of her late husband. Yes, she'll join in on teasing him and doesn't stop Kimberly from trying to seduce her big brother (though it always fails comically).

David is also one of those types that while he excels in technology and is very smart, he's as blind as a bat when it comes to girls liking him. Unless it's like now, but Kimberly has been so in his face about it, and all the teasing from Angela has made him as well as his own inexperience keep him from showing physical expressions at this point.

And most important, I wanted this version of David to be more romantic. One where he's not overly smug or having an evil look to him. While he knows Ami is brainwashed to be his slave, he still loves Ami. He wants to be romantic with her, and with his other slaves as well. Basically, he's overthinking it and wants to have the perfect moment with them. He doesn't just see them as slaves, or trophies, or even other words like sluts and whores that I will never use in my writing. While it's all good for anyone who does that and I don't mind it in other works, I just can't bring myself to do that. David loves and respects the girls so much that he himself will never call them that, even on the original Club Spiral series where he is more than happy to engage in sexual fun with his Spiral Slaves. Again, it makes this series different from the others I've written before.

I also wanted to use this series to flesh out all my OC's, so more things will be revealed in time about them. That includes Anna, Angela, Kimberly, Rebecca Lys, and maybe Amy Buzzington. I'm not sure if I'll have her in the AU series, but since I'll be making mentions of Honeycomb Hive in future chapters, she could appear here too.

More stories, comics, and pictures are coming soon, so stay tuned! Until next time, take care and stay well everyone!

This comic page was made by Wadevezecha and is posted with permission.

Posted on 2022-06-18 23:17:12
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Yesssssss~ Time for some deep hypno hehehe~~~