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- Id: 151048
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Posted: 2022-08-23 16:28:34
by IDPet - Size: 2000x2200
- Source: www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/100714827
- Rating: Explicit
- Score: 25 (vote up)
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>> #479717
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Xiana wished a sister, but her "sister" wished a cat.
>> #479727
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>> #479728
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Hey, explain my mistakes would be nice. I can't improve if you don't explain it.
>> #479735
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>> #479884
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> so her other personality o take on a physical form
That O is probably a typo, but "to" isn't gramatically correct here. "could" or "can" would be correct. You could also change the "so" to a "for", and then "to" works
> but Xiana wasn't interested in a sister, she wanted was to have a cat ,so she used her hypnosis skillson Xiana
besides the spacing mistakes, "she wanted was to have a cat" needs to either start with the word "what" or remove the word "was".
The other sentences have correct grammar, but the fact both characters have the same name make it very confusing to read.
>> #479886
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About the names, The original girl is Xiana and the other one is Xania, it's similar, but that's ot the same name.