Posted on 2023-01-20 01:38:59
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Hello, my friends! I hope you are all doing well today. Here is the next part of the Original Club Spiral Series made by the great artist Bluebullpen With Urd now completely under David's control, it's time to settle up their 'bet'. And David sure does get a very nice 'Glimpse Of Heaven' as the Goddess of the Past so eloquently put a bit ago. And it truly is quite the heavenly view if I do say so myself. And here is the story to go with it. ^^


David looked over the prone woman before him. She truly was a celestial beauty if there ever was one. For her part, Urd could only stand there and let the mortal who now controlled her look his fill. The pink spirals in her eyes still spin and her face remains an emotionless mask.

"So my dear Urd, it looks like you are completely under my hypnotic control." He told her.

"Yes, Master... I am completely under your hypnotic control..." Urd intoned with her mindless voice.

David was quite impressed with his Spiral Tech. He was sure that with a woman like Urd, it would have taken longer and even some taking to get her to fall this deeply into an obedient trance. Though he knew of her mishaps with mind control and demonic possessions where her personality was altered. But for it, all to leave such a big hole in her mental defenses was still quite an intriguing development. Even with his breakthroughs in hypnotic tech, he didn't think it would be this easy to hypnotize such a woman.

Of course, perhaps her ego and letting down her guard was her true Achilles Heel.

"I'm the luckiest guy in the world to have such beauty under my control. And you'll do anything I want won't you?"

"Yes, Master... what is your desire?" Urd asked in a blank and empty voice.

Oh, he had many desires at the moment. But one in particular nagged at him in the back of his mind. And it was then that David remembered their little 'bet' from before.

"Well, my dear. You lost the bet. And since it was fair and square, you have to honor it and show me that 'Glimpse of Heaven' you promised."

"Yes, Master... You won... It was fair... I lost... I must show you a 'Glimpse of Heaven... I must honor my debt..." Urd said mindlessly as she paced her hands in front of her chest.

David smiled and wondered just what he was about to see. 'What could she have meant by a 'Glimpse of Heaven'? Is she going to open up a portal leading to a golden staircase up to the pearly gates of... HELLO!!!!!'

David's thoughts stopped and his jaw dropped as Urd grasped the metal ring to her top and slowly pulled it down. Then with both hands, she grasped the sides of her top and pulled it open revealing the most beautiful sight he had ever seen in his lifetime. And he had seen some fantastic boobs quite recently. But the pair that had garnered all his attention was truly heaven-sent. And the rumors that he heard were true. Goddesses don't wear bras.

"They're magnificent..." David said almost in a trance like a state smiling like a cat that got the cream.

Urd blinked but responded to his statement in a predictable manner. "Thank you Master... not many mortals have gotten to see them up close"

That brought David out of his stupor, still grinning like an idiot, his face still red from blushing. "And... you'll let me touch them won't you my beautiful Goddess slave."

"Yes, Master... you may touch them..." Urd said as David grinned again before she continued. "You may kiss them... you make suck on them... you may fuck them... my body is yours... I exist to fulfill your every sexual desire... all of me is ready for your pleasure..."

Wow, she really is under deep and he hadn't even begun her true brainwashing cycle.

"And why did you say that?" David asks her.

"Because you hypnotized me... I am now your slave... I am beautiful, sexy, and desirable... It is only fitting that you take me in all ways... you are my Master... you are not a fool... It's only natural... You are attractive... I desire you..." The woman blinked and blushed but remained in her trance. "Desire you... to command me..."

David grinned again and he slowly raised a trembling hand towards her perfect and flawless mocha breast. And with the timidest and gentle of touches, he places his fingertips on her gloriously huge mound. Urd made a small little gasp before moaning lightly, the spirals in her eyes spinning faster.

"So perfect," David said as he grew a bit bolder as Urd stayed in her trance. He maneuvered his hand to get a hand full and savored the feel of her smooth skin, his thumb stroking her nipple. He could feel it getting hard as she moaned a bit louder.

"Do you like this, my slave?" David asked.

"Yeeessss... Maaasssttteeerrr..." Urd moaned out mind mindlessly blank pleasure.

"That's because you love my touch. It makes you feel so good, hot, and horny." David told her.

"Yeeeesss... I love it..." Urd moaned out. "Makes me feel... good... hot... horny..."

David smiled as he took his hand away. He idly wondered that if he brainwashed her to lactate would she give chocolate milk? Now that would be a heavenly choice for his menu.

Somewhere over the internet, a Tiny Cow was reading this and thinking. "Mooo Mooooo Moo Mooo! Moo Mooo Mo-mo-mo..."

Translation: "You have some nice ideas, Davey. And I'm going to steal this one. Hee-Hee-Hee!"

Back at Club Spiral, David smiled as new ideas came to mind. Because he knew that with the beautiful Urd as his new Spiral Slave, heaven truly was a place on Earth. It almost made him want to sing.

To Be Continued...


And there you have it. I hope you liked the new picture and story. As for that last bit, I have a friend who goes by the name Blessedbycows and I wanted to give him a mention here as I did in the original Crystal Castle series. This picture is just perfect for me. Urd looks so hot and sexy with her breasts uncovered and I love David's expression. Sure he has sexy Spiral Slaves with huge breasts and sees them, but this was a divine bosom that could make any Mind Controller praise the heavens that she is part of their harem. I really do love adding these elements of comedy to make David more human and less perfect. I think I'm getting better at it too. ^^

More pictures, comics, and stories are coming soon. And for those who have been wondering, starting tomorrow I will begin releasing the first seven completed pages of the AU Crystal Castle series. I hope you're all ready to see more of Kimberly Smith! There will be reasons why she didn't appear in Chapter 4 of Club Spiral. So get ready for some sexy fun as she turns pretty girls into her obedient dolls.

So until next time, take care and stay well everyone!

This picture was made by Bluebullpen and is posted with permission. ^^

Posted on 2023-01-21 01:53:28
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Fuck that's good~~~ *drools and rubs*

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm always so hot to flash *bites lip*