Posted on 2023-01-25 00:41:21
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Hello, my friends! I hope you are doing well. Here is the next page to the AU Crystal Castle series made by the great artist Wadevezecha

As Ami stares at the Club Spiral sign, she begins to wonder why such a place exists around such abnormal stores where you could purchase items at.

It's then that an invisible whisper and pull puts Ami into a semi-trance state as her curiosity consumes her thoughts and she could feel the pull of the Club continue to grow. One step forward, the compulsion grows stronger. With another step towards the door, the pull becomes stronger still. And soon, Ami's empty eyes stared unblinkingly as her voice comments how she needs to investigate Club Spiral. And walking through the door seals her fate of becoming Master David's first Spiral Slave.

I really love how this page came out. I was tempted to put some voice effects whispering to Ami like 'Come... Come To Me...' or 'You can't resist... come and join me... become mine forever...' But I felt her expression and dialogue worked best without them as her curiosity caused her to get captured by the hypnotic 'Lure Spell' all the stores have. This could happen to other girls too. Or may the greedy ones will be looking to make a quick buck. There are always reasons why the girls would enter the stores.

For Ami, it was her curiosity and fascination that caused her to come in.

For Usagi, it will be her naiveite and innocent heart and some remanence of her child/crybaby personality from the first season that seals her fate.

For Rei, she may have a mild case of vanity every now and then that can be exploited. Plus I feel that out of all the Senshi, Rei would be like and be interested in older men. I mean, she did date Mamoru for a time as then there was that other guy she seemed to care for but it was never explored. Though he is older than her too. So the ancient Egyptian gold Isaad will be irresistible to her and some honeyed words of her beauty and singing would cause her to lower her guard for her to be hypnotized by a replica of Jafar's Staff from Aladdin. When didn't he just hypnotize Jasmine instead of the Sultan?

For Makoto, it will be her desire to find Usagi as VR-CADE was the place the blonde originally wanted to go and her competitive spirit also causes her to fall into a trance. Of course, she is able to resist a bit more but obviously falls for Karyu at first sight. Cliched I know, but if ain't broke, don't fix it.

And For Minako, her desire to become a J-Pop singing star and the offer of such a makeover would cause her to submit to Angela and her Siren Singing voice... or eyes... or boobs... What do you think? I'm still undecided about that. But let's just say Minako won't be as boy-crazy once Angela gets her through a sexy Siren Brainwashing.

And of course, there could be other traits that different girls have that could work too. I'll be working on the reasons why Princess Twilight Sparkle goes to Crystal Castle, maybe it's the stress of being the Princess Of Friendship and she hadn't had any real fun in a long while? I think that would work.

And still many more girls are coming in the future. Misato Katsurugi from NGE going to play the first-person shooter Mind Crises while Makoto 'tests' out the fighting game Virtua-Vixens. Or Ishizu Ishtar goes to Oasis and becomes the Sexy Slave of Master Isaad while Rei becomes his obedient fire priestess, songbird, and fire elemental, based on the legendary Dijini the Ifriti.

And for those who are going to ask, this ends Ami's appearance in this chapter. I only used these pages to get Usagi into The Nexus as well as give her more of a reason as to how she got to Club Spiral in the first place. No need to redo Chapter 2 of Club Spiral. I just wanted to add the 'Lure Spell' and show her off actually entering the club. The next page will fully feature Usagi trying to get to Crystal Castle.

Of course, more comic pages, stories and pictures are coming soon as well. Let me know what you think of these story ideas for the future of the AU series. ^^ Until next time, take care and stay well everyone!

This comic page was made by the great artist Wadevezecha and is posted with permission.

Posted on 2023-01-25 00:52:13
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I feel much better Anonymous. Thank you for asking. ^^

Posted on 2023-01-25 01:50:56
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I love how Ami is always so susceptible to brainwashing. Seems smarts doesnt equal willpower.

Posted on 2023-01-25 02:17:58
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minako my vote is for boobs because boobs is always a sexy option for hypnosis

Posted on 2023-01-25 02:22:28
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Wonderful and Entrancing hehe~~~

Posted on 2023-01-25 04:13:22
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Your story time is always welcome