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toothshoe
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Posted on 2023-08-04 01:10:08
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I am a fan of the art style. Very nice. One note that I have is the positioning of the dialogue. The vertical bars can be confusing at times when determining the order of speech. Maybe its fine for most and I am overreacting, but perhaps an left to right approach would be something to look into? Just a thought. Regardless, good work.
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