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Vanndril
>> #20763
Posted on 2014-06-14 12:25:49
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This was one of my really old manips, from during my days at the hypnopics collective. I decided to post it here, now, because Cradily reminded me of it.

The idea was that this manip would be a lead-in to a set of manips all of women who somehow found themselves enthralled by this album, focusing on their videos to their new master. Nothing ever came of this, though. To explain the cut-and-dry explanation that is the caption - back then, most of my manips were dialogues, ramblings, monologues, or explanations by a sort of roleplay alias I had loved at the time, known only by his initials: VL. He was supposed to be a researcher for hypnosis and mind control, focusing mainly on his search for new methods of control over the minds of others or for methods to make the known ways better and more efficient.

It's not the most sterling example of my older work, mainly due to the bland caption, but at least I chose an awesome source image that made the empty eyes fit into it so perfectly. :3

Darktao
>> #20770
Posted on 2014-06-14 13:56:54
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Vandril I have to comment here. I usually don't because my last attempt to blend in with a community wasn't very good.

But I like this picture. And the caption was fun idea. The serial brainwashing of a set of lovely women under the age of 40 and the shennangins that your character could into is more than interesting it all sounds very fantastic.

This girl for instance... * scrolls up * Young look medium hair run her as an early college student. Set her apart in the sense that she's done something most of the other girls didn't or don't do often. ( For instance she stood up and masturbated rather than siting like all the other girls) Showing that she enjoys showing off and draw attention to her eyes how they had an emptiness that was different form others and after bringing her in she turns out to be a hypno enthusiast he could use her to screen his new candidates or hell she could be his test subject or new slaver.

A mountain of possiblities. And your work has only improved since then. Hell I loved the work you did with your profile picture that shit was rad yo. ( Never saying that again.) Anyway i may not respond to anything said after this due to sheer embarassment or fear of social backlash for saying the word "yo" but I just wanted you to know. I loved your works at the collective. I'm sure some of them disappeared at some point so it wasnt until now that I remembered you were there. But even so it wasnt bland and even if it was it was a starter. So it had the space to be bland its worth would be colored by all that came in its wake you know? .... End Rant

scp-682
>> #20773
Posted on 2014-06-14 16:25:02
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Nice manip...you should do more.

Darktao, you need to work on punctuation, its hard for me to understand what you're saying at times. Like the last sentence for instance.

I used to be TERRIBLE with grammar, specifically punctuation. Constantly doing this...people found it annoying...the ellipses...

I got a lot of hate because of this, if you can get better at your grammar, I can almost guarantee things will clear up.

P.S. I've been spelling "guarantee" wrong for a long time, till now. I never knew it had a U there...

Darktao
>> #20779
Posted on 2014-06-14 19:02:43
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You know, you've got a point. My bad. I usually just type as I think it. A lot.

Cradily
>> #20790
Posted on 2014-06-15 00:24:00
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Niceee =D Your story is way more fleshed out than mine, lol. Should totally make/upload more.

Darktao said:
Anyway i may not respond to anything said after this due to sheer embarassment or fear of social backlash for saying the word "yo" but I just wanted you to know. I loved your works at the collective.


I know that feeling, sometimes I spend an hour trying to re-word my posts so it doesn't come off as stupid. But since I'm not going to be telling anyone I know that I am on here I just decided to just type and post without thinking too much. Which may be bad because I can't look back at some of my posts because of embarrassment. OH WELL.

Darktao
>> #20799
Posted on 2014-06-15 03:00:34
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You know what... I think you're right. I've been called ok at writing is there anyone who can manip a pic and add in text. I know I can write a script I just dont have the proper tech or know how to make a decent pic here. At least not one I'd ever be satisfied with. If I just found at some point and wrote out a script I wonder how I'd do. If Cradily has the same issue I dont really have much of an excuse. I appreciate you taking the time to comment and help me feel better by the way. Thanks.

ClueElf
>> #20806
Posted on 2014-06-15 05:17:09
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You guys are sorta overreacting about how you type comments. :P You're perfectly fine. Don't worry so much about a random post on a random image in some dark corner of the Internet. Nobody types perfect all the time, and saying things like 'yo' isn't going to make anyone freak out.

Now that that's out of the way: Awesome picture, if you ever get inspired to make more please share them. :)

Vanndril
>> #20918
Posted on 2014-06-17 08:42:09
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Darktao said:
I usually don't because my last attempt to blend in with a community wasn't very good.


Aw... Well don't worry about us. We're generally a nice bunch. Unless you're posting art, then we're ruthless. :P

I kid about the ruthlessness, of course.

Darktao said:
Vandril I have to comment here. [...] I like this picture. And the caption was fun idea. The serial brainwashing of a set of lovely women under the age of 40 and the shennangins that your character could into is more than interesting it all sounds very fantastic.

[...] Hell I loved the work you did with your profile picture that shit was rad yo. ( Never saying that again.) [...] I just wanted you to know. I loved your works at the collective. I'm sure some of them disappeared at some point so it wasnt until now that I remembered you were there. But even so it wasnt bland and even if it was it was a starter. So it had the space to be bland its worth would be colored by all that came in its wake you know? .... End Rant


Thanks, Tao. :) It's good to know that some enjoy my older works, too. I appreciate it.

On the point of some of my work disappearing: not so much. I mean, a lot of my stuff on Hypnochan, back when that was a thing, hasn't since been reuploaded here. But, as far as my stuff from the collective, only my first manip sequence and one canonically-loli image (which is what matters at the collective) have ever been deleted from my gallery. Of the work I've ever shared, all the rest is still where I left it. ;)

So, thanks again for posting your thoughts. And don't hesitate to try to get in on the community. I mean, we may not be perfect, but we're one of the nicest, most understanding communities I've seen on the internet that hasn't resorted to being a hugbox (a site overwhelmed with false, enforced niceties, where negative comments are a punishable offense or are considered taboo).

ClueElf said:
You guys are sorta overreacting about how you type comments. :P You're perfectly fine. Don't worry so much about a random post on a random image in some dark corner of the Internet. Nobody types perfect all the time, and saying things like 'yo' isn't going to make anyone freak out.


This. :P It's best advice.

ClueElf said:
Awesome picture, if you ever get inspired to make more please share them. :)


Thanks. Not sure of making more on this story idea, though. Maybe someday.

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