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  • Id: 17627
  • Posted: 2014-06-24 03:16:23
    by MindWarp
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  • Rating: Explicit
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MindWarp
>> #21345
Posted on 2014-06-24 03:18:15
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Part one I guess. I still plan to continue a series but I need to find appropriate images for each character. Any recommendations and/or constructive criticism is more than welcome.
Cradily
>> #21347
Posted on 2014-06-24 03:35:42
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There are some typos in the story that may be a problem, for example 'put his arm around her waste' made me think poop and I may or may not have laughed at that thought xD The tagging also seems a bit weird to me (do we even use plain male/female tags?)

Other than that, I'm definitely interested in a continuation =P
Kansattica
>> #21367
Posted on 2014-06-24 08:57:48
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Well, Cradily addressed my spelling concerns. I fixed up the tags a bit. "Femsub" and "maledom" tags were mission. I made "fur after dark" a copyright tag- would an artist tag be more appropriate? Also, I assume that "Helen Dish" and "Max Blackrabbit" are your characters, so I tagged them as such.

Technical concerns aside, though, I'm eager to see where this goes.
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