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daveyboysmith9
>> #516789
Posted on 2023-08-04 17:17:57
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Hello, my friends! I hope you are doing well. Here is the long-awaited next page to the Original Club Spiral series made by the great artist Bluebullpen Sorry that this has been delayed for so long, but the last two months have been very busy for me. I'm hoping to get the backlog of completed commissions out soon before the next set of AU Crystal Castle pages is released. Thank you all for being patient with me especially Stepford Crimson whose OC stars next to Urd here. And BBP did a fantastic picture! I love Crimson and Urd's poses as the dance and the backgrounds mixed with green and purple spirals that spin in their eyes!

And here is the story to go with it.


David smiled as he finished the last bits of his paperwork. His sister had also just dropped off some of the new Club Spiral uniforms that he couldn't wait to see his harem wear. And of course and old friend was coming by to visit as well. Zach was a good guy, but David did wonder why his old school chum was choosing now to check out his Club. And it wasn't even open yet. But still it was Zach, maybe he had some new device or hypnotic program he needed help with.

"It will be nice to see him again. Though I hope he's not still pinning for Kimberly." David winced at that and put it out of his mind for now. That was probably the one time where he, Angela and their mother Anna all agreed that the youngest Smith sibling went too far. To be fair though, Zach was pretty persistent in his attempts to woo her, but playing a guitar outside the bathroom during a very private moment was probably not a good idea.

"Master!" David was brought out of his musings as he heard the voice of his lovely of his AI Charlotte calling out to him. "It's been two hours Master! Your new Spiral Slaves brainwashing and conditioning has been fully completed and they await your inspection!"

David smiled as he stood and fixed his tie and jacket. He was sure, he wouldn't be wearing them for that much longer, but still it was the quirks of a young buisness man who believed he should always look immaculate for any meeting.

"I can't believe two hours passed that quickly." David said to himself. "Time sure does fly when your buried in paperwork."

"Especially since their brainwashing finished about a half hour early, so I had them go through a refresher just to be sure." Charlotte told him.

David frowned. "Isn't that a bit of overkill? I mean, Urd being a Goddess I could see, but Crimson probably didn't need that extra time."

"Well, you looked pretty busy and I didn't want to disturb you while you finished your work," Charlotte admitted. "But Don't worry, I made sure not to give them the same treatment as I did with Sei, so they won't be ripping your clothes off upon sight."

David sighed as he walked down the hall towards the training room. That could at least mean he didn't have to worry about torn slacks and missing buttons. Still, he was very eager to see his two new slaves. And as the door slid open, his smile grew in absolute lust.

There they were, Crimson and Urd, dancing their poles and moaning in happy pleasure as they do so. He could hear their voices in a chanting singing mode as the music and subliminals were turned down.

"We are... SSSSSSLLLLLAAAVVVEEESSS FOR YOU! Please command us! We will quench all your lust!"
"We're... SSSSSLLLLAAAVVVEEESSS For you! We've been entranced! Now please with our dance!"

Crimson: MASTER! Won't you kiss me? Please don't tease me! My body is your toy!
Urd: MASTER! You now own me! Come and touch me! MMmmm, I know just what you'll enjoy!

"We are SSSSLLLAAAVVVEEESSS For you! We're under your spell! We know that you will fuck us well."
"We're... SSSLLLAAAVVVEEESSS For you! We're ready to obey! We will please you, night or day!"

David smiled as they sang. "I must admit they have great form and great voices together. "

Upon hearing his voice, Both Crimson and Urd stopped dancing and held their pose.

"Oh, Master! We're so ready to obey your will. What will have your new slaves do first?" Crimson asked in between a few giggles.

"Ohhhh... I can think of a few things I would love to do for you Master." Urd said with a lustful purr. "And by judging the tent in your pants, I know exactly the 'cure' for such discomfort."

David blushed but couldn't deny the bulge that was causing an increasing discomfort.

"That would be quite fun to experience. Though you girls still need to be fitted for your new uniforms."

"Ooooh! I know the best way for you to take our measurements Master!" Crimson said as she started to saunter over to him, with Urd following after, their huge bouncing breasts making him blush and nearly as hypnotic as their swaying hips.

"O-Oh? What's that?" David asked as they stopped and posed one more time.

"Mmmmm I believe getting up close and very personal will work just fine." Urd purred out again.

"Oh yes, Master! We're ready for your pleasure anytime you desire." Crimson said with another pose.

"Anyway, you want." Urd continued with another pose that made David's jaw drop.

"Any time you need us. We'll always be ready for you. As the song goes..." They both said before they started to sing again.

"Bend us over, lay us down, command us to our knees! We're ready to fuck you anytime, anyway you please..." The pair sang and moaned out in pleasure.

Well, how could David argue with that? And Zach wasn't supposed to come until much later. So he did have lots of spare time right now... maybe he could indulge himself a bit...


And there you have it! I hope you all like the story and I do apologize for posting this so late. I have lots to post and hopefully, I can get back on track and get a bit of a writing schedule going as long as my computer doesn't crash again and I lose most of my writing. But more is coming as this is the first of five pages with Crimson and Urd together, so stay tuned. ^^

More comics, stories, and pictures are on the way. So until next time everyone, stay safe and stay well!

This picture was made by the great artist Bluebullpen and is posted with permission. ^^

MisterMan4
>> #516794
Posted on 2023-08-04 21:07:38
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Oh. Nice to see you requesting bluebullpen art again. Gotta say missed these styles of commissions from you. Hurray!

pokemongirl
>> #516848
Posted on 2023-08-05 03:57:49
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So good to see this one back mmmmmmmmmm so hot *drools and rubs*

GrandSylux
>> #517087
Posted on 2023-08-07 20:02:25
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What I wouldn't give to visit this club~ Nicely done Davey~

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