Posted on 2023-08-14 22:41:04
Score: 5 (vote Up)

So saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad. I cry.

Posted on 2023-08-15 01:54:37
Score: 12 (vote Up)

She's literally only been fucking your Shadow-ass looking OC this entire time Artifact, that's not slutty behavior when you've hypnotized her to do that exact thing lmao! If you were going to fuck her like the slut she was, you wouldn't be fucking her at all - go figure out where that damn fourth Chaos Emerald is or something, give us all a laugh!

Posted on 2023-08-15 02:15:08
Score: 15 (vote Up)

Arosebyproxy, you need to chill, Ive been reading your comments the whole time and Im ngl, its kinda funny how heated youve been getting over the cartoon animal porn. If you dont like it, blacklist it. lol

Posted on 2023-08-15 05:09:18
Score: 12 (vote Up)

Just read this whole comic up to this point.
It was hot for the first dozen pages, and sending her back to her girlfriend stuffed full of cum was a great idea.

But past that, I don't see the point of stringing Red along. Personally, I think it be better to either bring her in and make her Arctic's bitch too, or just cut her off so Enid can be his bitch all the time.

Posted on 2023-08-16 03:46:58
Score: 9 (vote Up)

Just finished reading to this point, and then saw the comments. Went back to read what was going on, and not going to lie man... They might be a little right.

Page 7 feels like you were countering a point someone made, but then they deleted it. I am not sure what is worse. That someone wanted to show sympathy towards the GF, and you shut them down because it is your fantasy and your art that you are paying for, either by money or your own time and effort... Or if there was never a point made, but you wanted to defend yourself from what you thought people were possibly thinking. But that is a rabbit hole we probably shouldn't go down.

On page 9, plsignoreme pointed out that mind control was merely a mechanism for the true fetish that is being presented in these pages. Which, looking back, he's not wrong. You remove the first two pages of these 21, then you would never tell she was mind controlled. But you shot down the entire argument, simply by deflecting it towards a character in the public domain, that (as far as I can see) does not actually have a fetishist for cheating. That being said, making someone have a fetish that they originally did not have, through the power of mind control, is not a valid argument, when the person being accused of the fetish the one who mind controlled them into having it. That would be similar to if I made my partner love the color blue, so I could gas light them into thinking I painted our living space walls blue, because they wanted me to.

From there, it becomes quite evident how smug the main character is in all of this. How blatant and uncaring he can be. Being that blatant and smug, and yet somehow that well hidden, simply do not mesh well, and it pulls people out of your story. For it feels more like a stroke of the ego more than a plot point of an actual personality. And people truly began to point this out on page 13. That being said, it was pointed out a few times in prior piece of AI made material that you produced previously.

While the first three pages were the mind control arc, the next four the blatant cheating arc, the next five the behind the scenes deviance; the last 8 are just a mash up of the 4 & 5 page arcs. This is a problem that a lot of writers have in a lot of their works. I wont deny that I am any different. You know what you want, and how you get there, and what you want to do but the follow through of what comes after can be concerningly, blank. And you just go back to what you know and what you want, and hope to make something new. Unfortunately nothing new is made, and it only degrades what you have. Its like how toy story 3 was a perfect end to a trilogy, and then they added a fourth. Or what they did to star wars. Or what they did after Avengers End Game. Or Oceans 13. Or Echem! V.v Apologies. I feel you get the point.


Anyhow, long presentation shortened to a few sentences; I feel that these pages are a counter to previous interactions with your AI posts you originally did. You lacked a solid story or character, and people did not like the cheating. So you started with a new cast, this time adding your personal character, with a public character, that most people would not immediately recognize, and made something out of it that you personally would enjoy. There is nothing bad with it, but if you wish to provide it to the public, perhaps you should also pay attention to what has worked as a trope in your preferred fetish before.

Posted on 2023-08-16 03:48:57
Score: 9 (vote Up)

we all like animal sex and all, but is anything besides sex gonna ever, uh, happen? i know this is a porn site and asking for plot progression in porn is like asking a dog to do your taxes, but still. this can only go on for so long before becoming absurd

Posted on 2023-08-16 03:49:00
Score: 8 (vote Up)

I do apologize.

I came to the sight to look up furry, hypnotic porn, and came out writing a sub-thesis for an english or debate class...

Well! Guess there is always e-621 or MCC.

Posted on 2023-08-16 18:46:04
Score: 8 (vote Up)

No theres a point there. At this point she doesnt even look mind controlled. Aside from the occasional name calling of master theres like.. no real evidence shes brainwashed. The eyes arent even that different from her old color

Posted on 2023-08-16 18:49:28
Score: 1 (vote Up)

@AranDaye

This isn't a single picture, but a comic, click on the message that says "This post belongs to one or more pools"

Posted on 2023-08-16 19:34:43
Score: 9 (vote Up)

Yeah I know. Ive commented on previous posts in this series. Still, she doesnt really look brainwashed. A slight change in the eye color, sure.

But its barely noticeable, her eyes arent glazed over either.