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Posted: 2024-02-18 23:50:30
by ArtifactFox - Size: 2235x5553
- Source: twitter.com/GlowHorn/status/1759347654801203704
- Rating: Explicit
- Score: 29 (vote up)
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>> #535784
Score: 16 (vote Up)
1.) I understand you want there to be "more hypnosis" and the next comic will have that. This is my FIRST writing piece, It won't be perfect.
2.) There is a difference between being rude and constructive criticism, so don't say things just to be rude.
3.) Fact is this comic still belongs here as they are being mind controlled. If they were not, these characters would NOT be doing this. Please be respectful.
>> #535791
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>> #535804
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>> #535828
Score: 2 (vote Up)
The criticism I initially laid upon this was not one to discourage you from continuing, but because I do genuinely like the art and want to see it go places.
Its your work, you are free to do this how you like. Part of what would make this stronger is for there to be a little more progression. Typically this can be done Either in the descent of their control, a slight flutter in their conditioning, or in the discovery and conversion of those around them. The quick domination is definitely a fun method, but is typically for shorter comics for the sake of brevity. I love the personality swap, sometimes a way that can be fun is by having the subject revel in their control. As if theyre happy theyve been brainwashed and mock anyone that still thinks they can or want to go back.
Im interested to see where you decide to go in the future. I hope this is more constructive of a comment for you. Good luck with your art.
>> #535883
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>> #535950
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>> #536067
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>> #536110
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>> #536210
Score: 2 (vote Up)
I don't want you to stop the series or anything - unless it's negatively affecting finances - but just some constructive criticism on what would make it more interesting to myself.
Maybe I'm alone in this, but I also personally get a bit of a kick from the breaking of the control too; the aftermath, so I personally hope to see their be an ending (though not one with a sad ending - a comedic one, or perhaps an embarrassed one.