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Monkfish
>> #537861
Posted on 2024-03-12 13:19:58
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This was very heavily inspired by Sadistic Caregiver by Fancyaddiction (who is my favourite manipper of all time). It's also my first time trying 2nd person writing, and I'm quite pleased with the effect.
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>> #537916
Posted on 2024-03-13 03:36:17
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I also love Fancyaddiction... and I love this!! Please make more!!!
Thathypnoguy
>> #537927
Posted on 2024-03-13 06:35:35
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One comment is that in the beginning I didnt realize that when there was a new paragraph it switch from what she was saying to the 2nd person. Next time might I suggest adding in different colored text or perhaps just adding quotation marks to signify when a person is speaking and when its 2nd person
Thebestial
>> #538035
Posted on 2024-03-14 10:21:55
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I love this, really great job! I'd love to see more from you!
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