Posted on 2024-03-16 02:14:27
Score: 12 (vote Up)

Before yet (another) comment war starts.
I underdstand some people didn't like this ending and the fact the hypnosis was short. Sadly the ending for this is already written. However, I have taken your comments into account for the next series. Also, this is an NTR comic. There is going to be NTR. Sorry. So please just enjoy the art. Thank you.

Posted on 2024-03-16 03:40:18
Score: 2 (vote Up)

This comic sucked for hypno content but the art was good!

Posted on 2024-03-16 04:34:12
Score: 4 (vote Up)

Loved the comic, I feel bad for the constant comment wars but I cant wait to see what you got in store. Blacklist feature exists guys(for the netorare), dont be discouraging to artists.

Posted on 2024-03-16 09:42:54
Score: 2 (vote Up)

This felt like ass reading this

Posted on 2024-03-16 13:28:44
Score: 1 (vote Up)

Thats how it ends? :(

Posted on 2024-03-16 15:59:32
Score: 10 (vote Up)

"This is an NTR comic. There is going to be NTR"

I don't think that's really the issue. I mean, obviously there are probably a couple people who don't like NTR in the comments but if you look at the tag, most postings in the tag are drama-free.

The issue is more that this is a 60 page comic, with 3 pages of mind control. Posted on a site that's primarily focused on mind control.

It'd be like going to an anime convention and showing a movie that has a 20 second anime clip a the start and then the rest is a 50s noir style live action film. People will complain about the genre and style of the film but it's not the genre that's the problem, it's the mis-match with the venue.

Posted on 2024-03-16 16:43:21
Score: 5 (vote Up)

#artifactFox i like ur comic !!! keep it up the next comic if
this was the ending ;)

Posted on 2024-03-16 21:17:56
Score: 7 (vote Up)

I'm going to try to say this as nice as I can.

People are going to be upset at this, for numerous reasons, so getting offended when people call you out on this is completely pointless.

You need to learn to know your audience. Yes, this content is technically allowed on the site, but that does not mean we have to like it. It's very clear that your fetish is NTR. You yourself admit this is a primarily NTR comic, on a website that is devoted to material that is primarily hypnosis related. This series has slightly more than 1/30th to do with hypnosis, and the rest is just self-indulgent fucking for fuckings' sake.

Glowhorn makes good art, I've even commissioned them myself before - so don't try to say we're disapraging the art. It's your writing that we take issue with. This story, for one, could have been told in a third of the time rather than making multiple pages in a row in which no plot is advancing. People are going to get tired of it. Take daveyboy's comics in comparison - there's almost always plot advancement in every piece. I would suggest being more like that when putting these together.

Second, the ending is... frankly, it's garbage. I'm not trying to kinkshame here, but as someone who has been cheated on before, this is frankly just saddening. It's unnecessarily mean-spirited, and, fiction or otherwise, it brought back extremely painful memories of my own breakup due to my exe's promiscuity, because she ended things in an extremely similar manner. You do you, boo, but I cannot understand how someone could get off to such genuine rudeness. Especially when a character like Enid has such a genuine healthy relationship with Red.

If you are going to do a part four to this, I'd suggest either finding a way to bounce back from this unnecessarily mean ending, or just not post it here at all, especially if you don't want any "comment wars" - which I think is a bit dramatic. Please learn to take criticism into account more healthy rather than resort to calling them "wars," and ignore the more hateful people who aren't offering anything constructive.

Posted on 2024-03-17 00:41:37
Score: 3 (vote Up)

really hoping the next 100 page comic has more than 3 panels of hypno~

Posted on 2024-03-17 01:44:15
Score: 7 (vote Up)

Yeah, as a constructive criticism I agreed with changer in it.

Basically for us on the hypno community, when we see hentai mangas where random guy just use a hypno app during 1 page and nothing relevant to hypnosis happen next don't tend to be exactly our cup of tea.

For example, I love pet play, but when I see a hentai manga with a character squatting as a dog on the cover, then check the manga and just see 1 panel with the character squatting, I feel a bit scammed. The rest of the manga was just vainilla sex and hypnosis didn't really matter at the point you can remove these pages and nothing changes.

Imagine a furry werewolf comic, where the character turns into a werewolf during 2 panels, then go back to normal and that doesn't happen again the rest of the comic.

For the next comics I sugguest try to expand the hypno part,
add triggers, add altered perceptionk, wake up/sleep/wake up scenarios, etc.

Don't feel forced to accept these suggestions, just trying to help with ideas.