blush bottomless breasts brown_hair empty_eyes expressionless femsub large_breasts long_hair nude pendulum reimu_hakurei topless touhou yakai

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Yakai
>> #31032
Posted on 2014-10-05 00:18:54
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Hi, i m back after some month ~
I drew Reimu but to be honnest i m still not sure at all if i should have upload this one with my currently lvl, well if it s too bad just delete it :)
Btw i m not used to this tags thing i m sorry i put as word i did know xD

Mindwipe
>> #31035
Posted on 2014-10-05 00:43:04
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WOW. You've gotten a LOT better. This is really nice. Good work!

Yuu-chan
>> #31048
Posted on 2014-10-05 03:28:29
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This piece is lovely~! You draw Reimu very well, I think ^^ Just keep at it, the more you draw, the better you'll get~!

ClueElf
>> #31052
Posted on 2014-10-05 03:41:42
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Very good picture!

Yakai
>> #31092
Posted on 2014-10-05 12:19:24
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Thanks for the comment, i will keep at drawing more and more ^^

Vanndril
>> #31239
Posted on 2014-10-06 09:12:17
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You know, it's funny. I was just wondering what happened to you the other night. Good timing, I guess!

And jeeze, yes, you have improved. Way more than just good enough to pass QC. Sure, not without things to improve on, but hardly bad. You're turning out to be quite the respectable artist, at this rate. :3

Your coloring and shading is good as ever. No, I daresay you even improved it quite a bit! You've also very obviously improved your proportions of the human body and the general shape of things.

I can see that you're still struggling a bit with hands and fingers. In particular, the hand by her crotch seems a bit awkward. Its shape and the coordination and position of the fingers seem just a little off. I can tell you tried extra hard to get that to look right. The extra sketch lines give it away. No shame there, though. As I hear it, hands and feet are two of the hardest parts of the human body to properly draw.

I don't know if you rushed the pendulum or what, but that seems to be lower quality in general than the rest of the pic. It's fairly obvious that its shape isn't quite right. While I definitely understand wanting to focus hard on the actual focus of the image (Reimu and her sexiness), I recommend that you not just skim over the environmental details either (such as the pendulum). I feel the pendulum's oddness alone brings this entire image down with it, if only just a little bit. In art, even small details matter.

In any case, it's very nice to see you still around. Your artwork has grown exponentially. Congrats, because I actually faved this one! You've definitely come a long way and, as I always say, I definitely look forward to seeing you improve and to seeing more from you as you grow as an artist. :D

Yakai
>> #31419
Posted on 2014-10-07 18:41:42
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Vanndril said:
You know, it's funny. I was just wondering what happened to you the other night. Good timing, I guess!

And jeeze, yes, you have improved. Way more than just good enough to pass QC. Sure, not without things to improve on, but hardly bad. You're turning out to be quite the respectable artist, at this rate. :3


Thanks ^^ i was really wondering if i should really already come back xD

Vanndril said:
Your coloring and shading is good as ever. No, I daresay you even improved it quite a bit! You've also very obviously improved your proportions of the human body and the general shape of things.

I can see that you're still struggling a bit with hands and fingers. In particular, the hand by her crotch seems a bit awkward. Its shape and the coordination and position of the fingers seem just a little off. I can tell you tried extra hard to get that to look right. The extra sketch lines give it away. No shame there, though. As I hear it, hands and feet are two of the hardest parts of the human body to properly draw.


About my coloring i still far from the lvl i want, i keep changing everytime i draw someone else xD.
Feet and hand are indeed the most difficult part for me after the coloring x)

Vanndril said:
I don't know if you rushed the pendulum or what, but that seems to be lower quality in general than the rest of the pic. It's fairly obvious that its shape isn't quite right. While I definitely understand wanting to focus hard on the actual focus of the image (Reimu and her sexiness), I recommend that you not just skim over the environmental details either (such as the pendulum). I feel the pendulum's oddness alone brings this entire image down with it, if only just a little bit. In art, even small details matter.


Okay i ll keep that in my mind.

Vanndril said:
In any case, it's very nice to see you still around. Your artwork has grown exponentially. Congrats, because I actually faved this one! You've definitely come a long way and, as I always say, I definitely look forward to seeing you improve and to seeing more from you as you grow as an artist. :D


Thanks again, i will come back with a real picture (this one was a doodle btw that s why i rushed the pendulum, since i was lazy, i m sorry xD) as soon i finished to work on my actually picture :P.

Vanndril
>> #31444
Posted on 2014-10-07 22:33:22
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Yakai said:
Thanks ^^ i was really wondering if i should really already come back xD


I was hoping you would. Every time you disappear like that, I'm afraid we scared you off or something, haha. XD

Yakai said:
About my coloring i still far from the lvl i want, i keep changing everytime i draw someone else xD.


While this is true, I was impressed by every coloring and shading style you used, so at least there's that. :P

Yakai said:
Thanks again, i will come back with a real picture (this one was a doodle btw that s why i rushed the pendulum, since i was lazy, i m sorry xD) as soon i finished to work on my actually picture :P.


This is a doodle...? Now I REALLY wanna see a "real picture" from you! :3

Yakai
>> #31621
Posted on 2014-10-09 00:00:31
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Vanndril said:
I was hoping you would. Every time you disappear like that, I'm afraid we scared you off or something, haha. XD


Well this is also kind of because of that xD

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