Posted on 2014-10-17 00:08:29
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Forgive me...i'm new to the site ish, I came out of lurking and I wanted to contribute in someway...i'm sorry, you can delete it now

Posted on 2014-10-17 00:27:03
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why should it be deleted? the drawing is a littlte rough ok but the story is good in my opinion.

Posted on 2014-10-17 00:32:11
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I think if I ever contribute in future...i'll just manipulate some other picture instead of drawing my own...

Posted on 2014-10-17 01:12:47
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The picture itself isn't terrible! What I would say requires some attention is your text on the side. Using rulers, line tools, etc to make that whole side black and aligning your text properly would fix that simply.

So while I'd say this attempt may not be of quality, you could improve it heavily with just a tiny bit of effort.

I would suggest more than a white background too, if only because it's on a computer so staring at a white lightbulb, but that may also be my headache talking. Still, don't be completely discouraged. There are ways to improve from this starting point for certain :)

Posted on 2014-10-17 01:13:20
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It's not that bad. If you want I can fix the text for you.

Posted on 2014-10-17 02:02:10
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Cutest story on Hypnohub? Show of hands?

Posted on 2014-10-17 13:54:08
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Hey I'm new too and trust me this a lot better than the stuff I upload

Posted on 2014-10-17 18:48:30
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...well this wasn't what I was expecting when I logged onto the website today...er, thank you all :D

Posted on 2014-10-17 18:49:18
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I'll go away and practise and follow the tips given before I upload again, thank you again!