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Yakai
>> #34140
Posted on 2014-11-01 20:06:33
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Hello, i dreamed of Aya yesterday si u thought about draw her today and i realized that draw pussy is freaking haard !! xD

Vanndril
>> #34157
Posted on 2014-11-02 00:04:05
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Yakai said:
Hello, i dreamed of Aya yesterday si u thought about draw her today and i realized that draw pussy is freaking haard !! xD


I dream of Aya every night. <3

This is really good! This is the kind of thing I hope to suddenly find when I go searching for porn on, say, Pixiv. Your rate of improvement continues to impress.

And yes, pussies are very hard to draw. A lot of artists - even fairly experienced ones, struggle to draw them. But, given the hurdles you've overcome thus far, I'm sure you'll manage. Just keep at it. :)

Dreamshade
>> #34159
Posted on 2014-11-02 00:11:44
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You've gotten a lot better :3

Yakai
>> #34169
Posted on 2014-11-02 02:20:11
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Vanndril said:
I dream of Aya every night. <3


I do it often too but not every night xD

Vanndril said:
This is really good! This is the kind of thing I hope to suddenly find when I go searching for porn on, say, Pixiv. Your rate of improvement continues to impress.

And yes, pussies are very hard to draw. A lot of artists - even fairly experienced ones, struggle to draw them. But, given the hurdles you've overcome thus far, I'm sure you'll manage. Just keep at it. :)



I did like to improve more thought, i think i still too slow like i m still bad at coloring (especially the color of cloth), i actually did like learn more stuff about how fold works, since i did like work on more erotic pose and stuff, but it s still a quite hard to get it xD

Dreamshade said:
You've gotten a lot better :3


Thank you :D

Vanndril
>> #34175
Posted on 2014-11-02 03:19:01
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Yakai said:
I did like to improve more thought, i think i still too slow like i m still bad at coloring (especially the color of cloth), i actually did like learn more stuff about how fold works, since i did like work on more erotic pose and stuff, but it s still a quite hard to get it xD


Of course you wish to improve further. :) You know what they say about an artist never being happy with their work. They always find something they could do better. That's just how being an artist works, apparently.

Being slow isn't really a bad thing or even an indication of artistic skill. Speed will come with experience rather than improvement. As you approach the point where you begin to learn and improve less often because there's less to improve in your art, and truly start to form your own distinct style, you'll likely find that your drawing speed will start to increase dramatically. As for now, since your style changes so often due to your constant improvement, you can't take advantage of muscle memory.

I think that your improvement is fairly well-rounded. You're not just improving on one aspect or another, but all around in general. And the improvement is not subtle, either - it's obvious. That's a very good sign, and as long as you continue to work at it, you obviously have the potential to continue to improve dramatically. I look forward to it.

Yuu-chan
>> #34219
Posted on 2014-11-02 16:12:35
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Your rate of improvement scares me >.<


Dreamshade
>> #34220
Posted on 2014-11-02 16:25:07
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Overall she looks pretty good, though I think her legs are a little short and she looks a lot younger than she normally is, though I'm not sure if the latter is intentional on your part. The fingers on her right hand look a little too curvy, but that's pretty minor.

I don't see any really glaring issues with the anatomy that would make me not like the art (aside from the pussy, but I can excuse that), so it's good. Keep getting better :3

Disclaimer: Dreamshade is not an artist and doesn't know diddly dick about actual artistic anatomy. He does know what he likes, though.

Yakai
>> #34363
Posted on 2014-11-04 11:49:34
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Vanndril said:
Of course you wish to improve further. :) You know what they say about an artist never being happy with their work. They always find something they could do better. That's just how being an artist works, apparently.

Being slow isn't really a bad thing or even an indication of artistic skill. Speed will come with experience rather than improvement. As you approach the point where you begin to learn and improve less often because there's less to improve in your art, and truly start to form your own distinct style, you'll likely find that your drawing speed will start to increase dramatically. As for now, since your style changes so often due to your constant improvement, you can't take advantage of muscle memory.

I think that your improvement is fairly well-rounded. You're not just improving on one aspect or another, but all around in general. And the improvement is not subtle, either - it's obvious. That's a very good sign, and as long as you continue to work at it, you obviously have the potential to continue to improve dramatically. I look forward to it.


So basically, i ll never be happy with my work even if i draw good enough xD.
Though i do need to improve as fast i can since when i m returning in my country i want to enter in a school art for my job (though i didn't choose yet since i don't know what i can do yet xD)


Yuu-chan said:
Your rate of improvement scares me >.<




Still too slow for me xD

Dreamshade said:
Overall she looks pretty good, though I think her legs are a little short and she looks a lot younger than she normally is, though I'm not sure if the latter is intentional on your part. The fingers on her right hand look a little too curvy, but that's pretty minor.

I don't see any really glaring issues with the anatomy that would make me not like the art (aside from the pussy, but I can excuse that), so it's good. Keep getting better :3

Disclaimer: Dreamshade is not an artist and doesn't know diddly dick about actual artistic anatomy. He does know what he likes, though.


Thanks for the critique that s helped me :D

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