Posted on 2015-01-04 15:08:40
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I think I went a bit nuts here with layering and effects

Still, been working on this one for a while and wanted to get it out there before I went nuts over every detail.

I would especially appreciate any feedback on what there is (or isn't) too much of, both for text and for effects

Posted on 2015-01-04 15:31:07
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I like it, but then, I've never been one for subtlety.

Posted on 2015-01-04 17:45:17
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That's intense @_@ good job!

The only recommendation I would have is mess around with dithering options (under image, mode, indexed). That can help smooth out the colors in a gif. But still, good animation @_@

Posted on 2015-01-05 01:42:20
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Yeah, this is just awesome.

Posted on 2015-01-05 02:34:20
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Ayy I remember you Rusty; you have that youtube channel with a hypnogirls video on it that I used to fap to sometimes. Unless there's another RShackleford and I'm a dumbass. Anyways, I'm not much of one for this kind of thing but I would suggest making it clearer at the start who is being hypnotized. Up until "Your Wonderful Cock" it looks kinda like both chicks are, since they have the same effect in their eyes. Also, formatting stuff like a book or movie's title looks weird. Your Wonderful Cock, in theaters now!

Posted on 2015-01-05 05:21:12
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Ah, that would be a different Rusty. Rusty Shakleford is an alias used by Dale in King of the Hill when he's trying to conceal his identity, it's a bit of a poke at myself for trying to think of a low key name.

Ah, thank you so much for the feedback. I was trying to convey that her irises pulsing meant she was doing the hypnotizing, vs the other girl where her whole eye was consumed with the effect meaning she was under her spell. I'll need to find some way to more effectively convey that.
I don't suppose anyone has any ideas?

Haha. Yeah, first time really doing formating text stuff, I'm still trying to get my sea legs there.

Posted on 2015-01-05 05:56:44
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Fuark, that's what I get for not watching TV. Still mighty suspicious there aiii. Anyways, normally the whole eye thing is reserved for either the submissive party or the dominant one. When it's not, like Kaa style where they both have it going on, we can see the submissive one's face, and then it's more obvious what's happening.

Posted on 2015-01-06 05:03:26
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amazing work!