Posted on 2015-01-30 22:46:42
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Some women can make a man's heart flutter with a kiss. Others will simply make the mind melt

As always, feedback is much sought after and appreciated.

Posted on 2015-01-31 02:16:24
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The English Dub name is Laylamon.

Posted on 2015-01-31 02:20:02
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However beyond the name thing, which is really stuck to the tags, I like it... shows how one of the Demon Lords works.

Posted on 2015-01-31 02:42:01
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yeah, they said they aren't changing that.

Posted on 2015-01-31 05:28:17
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Great manip job, but the look on her face doesn't feel right for a dom. "I'm mildly aroused by your weak will!"

Posted on 2015-01-31 07:23:44
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I was trying to go for a "Tch, I broke another one."
I don't think I quite got that across

Big thanks for the constructive feedback, I really appreciate that since writing to fit the picture is still my biggest weakpoint

Posted on 2015-01-31 08:43:01
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If you want your domme to be a complete goofball (an idea I am completely in favor of), then write her like one.

"Oopsie! Looks like that mind a'yours just couldn't stand up t'all that kiss-witchery business! Aw, hash potatoes, but it just keeps on happenin'!"

Posted on 2015-01-31 08:50:54
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I thought she was LeBlanc.