So, this is a request by Bullet. He wanted a continuation to my FUF contribution, so here it is! :D I hope he likes it. I also tried something different with the "glow" which I was taught by an artist on the Hypnopics Collective. If anyone has any advice/constructive criticism, I appreciate it! (Also, I'm sure I missed some tags. o_o)
I dunno, I just feel like I need improvement in that area. Still hope that I did good enough for Bullet!
Well what I can tell you about glow is that it shouldn't be subtractive. What I mean by that is notice how the glow is making things around it darker, it should be additive and make things lighter. Especially for the that shine on her eye, it's being covered by the blue when instead it should remain white. Have you tried playing with layermodes? Gimp and Photoshop have them so you should use the ones that make the layer with the glow lighten the layers underneath rather than darken.
Also what I like to do is take different hues that have a lighter value to use as glow, for example if there is a blue spiral i would give it a teal glow. I made a quick example of what im talking about cuz i dont know how to words. I also took the right blue spiral, duplicated it, made it teal, blurred it and set the layer mode to lighten to see how that would look. puu.sh/g7icb/1f4c180e1a.jpg
okay im done criticizing, please continue to do your thing
I don't get it. If she's hypnotized, what need does she have to hypnotize men in order to get them to have sex with her? Wouldn't a man want to do that anyway?
Wienerman said: I don't get it. If she's hypnotized, what need does she have to hypnotize men in order to get them to have sex with her? Wouldn't a man want to do that anyway?
Perhaps this is a gender-progressive manip. Just because a woman is willing does not mean a given man is (serious talk, here, of course in porno-land, men are always willing).
Ogodei said: Perhaps this is a gender-progressive manip. Just because a woman is willing does not mean a given man is (serious talk, here, of course in porno-land, men are always willing).
Whoa, it logged me out and prompted me to the create-account screen in a little popup bubble. In my tiredness, i typed a different name for a different site, and made a new account.
Also, this is Pretty Cure. Character Cure Happy, Artist name is Sasayama.
Wienerman said: I don't get it. If she's hypnotized, what need does she have to hypnotize men in order to get them to have sex with her? Wouldn't a man want to do that anyway?
It's her eyes man, she's got eye powers. o3o Sorry if I wasn't too descriptive with that.
Zko said: Well what I can tell you about glow is that it shouldn't be subtractive. What I mean by that is notice how the glow is making things around it darker, it should be additive and make things lighter. Especially for the that shine on her eye, it's being covered by the blue when instead it should remain white. Have you tried playing with layermodes? Gimp and Photoshop have them so you should use the ones that make the layer with the glow lighten the layers underneath rather than darken.
Also what I like to do is take different hues that have a lighter value to use as glow, for example if there is a blue spiral i would give it a teal glow. I made a quick example of what im talking about cuz i dont know how to words. I also took the right blue spiral, duplicated it, made it teal, blurred it and set the layer mode to lighten to see how that would look. puu.sh/g7icb/1f4c180e1a.jpg
okay im done criticizing, please continue to do your thing
No no, I greatly appreciate the advice! I'm not sure what I did, but I see the differences, mine looks like a "black hole" and it sucks in the light instead of letting it out. Not sure what to do with "layermodes" I'm still really new to all of this! ^^; I'm probably going to re-do this pic...I'm not happy with what I did with the eyes. I know I can do better.
I'm glad that you like it! I might end up re-doing it though, but if you're satisfied, I'll leave it alone. What matters most is that you like it, I did it because you asked! :3
Reversed1 said: I'm glad that you like it! I might end up re-doing it though, but if you're satisfied, I'll leave it alone. What matters most is that you like it, I did it because you asked! :3
You could just have two versions of the picture up if you want to re-do while keeping this one =P
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He wanted a continuation to my FUF contribution, so here it is! :D
I hope he likes it.
I also tried something different with the "glow" which I was taught by an artist on the Hypnopics Collective.
If anyone has any advice/constructive criticism, I appreciate it!
(Also, I'm sure I missed some tags. o_o)
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I do better with the Zko method than www.tfw2005.com/boards/tu...wing-eyes-pride-gimp.html this method.
I dunno, I just feel like I need improvement in that area. Still hope that I did good enough for Bullet!
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...One thing I know that I need some advice on is making "glow" in the eyes.
I do better with the Zko method than www.tfw2005.com/boards/tu...wing-eyes-pride-gimp.html this method.
I dunno, I just feel like I need improvement in that area. Still hope that I did good enough for Bullet!
Well what I can tell you about glow is that it shouldn't be subtractive. What I mean by that is notice how the glow is making things around it darker, it should be additive and make things lighter. Especially for the that shine on her eye, it's being covered by the blue when instead it should remain white. Have you tried playing with layermodes? Gimp and Photoshop have them so you should use the ones that make the layer with the glow lighten the layers underneath rather than darken.
Also what I like to do is take different hues that have a lighter value to use as glow, for example if there is a blue spiral i would give it a teal glow. I made a quick example of what im talking about cuz i dont know how to words. I also took the right blue spiral, duplicated it, made it teal, blurred it and set the layer mode to lighten to see how that would look. puu.sh/g7icb/1f4c180e1a.jpg
okay im done criticizing, please continue to do your thing
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I don't get it. If she's hypnotized, what need does she have to hypnotize men in order to get them to have sex with her? Wouldn't a man want to do that anyway?
Perhaps this is a gender-progressive manip. Just because a woman is willing does not mean a given man is (serious talk, here, of course in porno-land, men are always willing).
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Perhaps this is a gender-progressive manip. Just because a woman is willing does not mean a given man is (serious talk, here, of course in porno-land, men are always willing).
Whoa, it logged me out and prompted me to the create-account screen in a little popup bubble. In my tiredness, i typed a different name for a different site, and made a new account.
Also, this is Pretty Cure. Character Cure Happy, Artist name is Sasayama.
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I don't get it. If she's hypnotized, what need does she have to hypnotize men in order to get them to have sex with her? Wouldn't a man want to do that anyway?
It's her eyes man, she's got eye powers. o3o
Sorry if I wasn't too descriptive with that.
Well what I can tell you about glow is that it shouldn't be subtractive. What I mean by that is notice how the glow is making things around it darker, it should be additive and make things lighter. Especially for the that shine on her eye, it's being covered by the blue when instead it should remain white. Have you tried playing with layermodes? Gimp and Photoshop have them so you should use the ones that make the layer with the glow lighten the layers underneath rather than darken.
Also what I like to do is take different hues that have a lighter value to use as glow, for example if there is a blue spiral i would give it a teal glow. I made a quick example of what im talking about cuz i dont know how to words. I also took the right blue spiral, duplicated it, made it teal, blurred it and set the layer mode to lighten to see how that would look. puu.sh/g7icb/1f4c180e1a.jpg
okay im done criticizing, please continue to do your thing
No no, I greatly appreciate the advice! I'm not sure what I did, but I see the differences, mine looks like a "black hole" and it sucks in the light instead of letting it out.
Not sure what to do with "layermodes" I'm still really new to all of this! ^^;
I'm probably going to re-do this pic...I'm not happy with what I did with the eyes. I know I can do better.
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This turned out great! Loving it! :D
I'm glad that you like it! I might end up re-doing it though, but if you're satisfied, I'll leave it alone.
What matters most is that you like it, I did it because you asked! :3
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I'm glad that you like it! I might end up re-doing it though, but if you're satisfied, I'll leave it alone.
What matters most is that you like it, I did it because you asked! :3
You could just have two versions of the picture up if you want to re-do while keeping this one =P