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111
>> #49886
Posted on 2015-03-19 01:50:59
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one thing that constantly nagged me was I couldn't put my finger on where I saw the girl in this one
I really like the ending
sorry about punctuation and gramma
NamesAreForTheWeak
>> #49887
Posted on 2015-03-19 01:57:32
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111 said:
sorry about punctuation and gramma


A proofreader might help - ask around on the forums (I would offer to proofread for you, but my schedule is so irregular it might take all week just to read one story).
slipslideman
>> #49888
Posted on 2015-03-19 02:03:48
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Is there really such a high demand for these kind of captions?

It's always the same story and most (like this one) aren't even proofread, making going through them a chore.

I know "different strokes" and all, but the general quality of the hub seems to be very low nowadays.
XavierBro-13
>> #49890
Posted on 2015-03-19 02:04:22
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I just added a few tags
111
>> #49896
Posted on 2015-03-19 02:27:03
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slipslideman said:
Is there really such a high demand for these kind of captions?

It's always the same story and most (like this one) aren't even proofread, making going through them a chore.

I know "different strokes" and all, but the general quality of the hub seems to be very low nowadays.

this is only my second post, first of this type and I proofread all my stories but my understanding of punctuation and gramma is simply crap
I thought my story had quite good plot

keiya
>> #50019
Posted on 2015-03-20 05:02:22
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NEVER proofread your own work. You know what it's supposed to say, you'll miss even the most obvious mistakes.
ClueElf
>> #54901
Posted on 2015-04-29 06:03:43
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111 said:
I thought my story had quite good plot

Agreed.


keiya said:
NEVER proofread your own work. You know what it's supposed to say, you'll miss even the most obvious mistakes.


Also agreed.

Zack
>> #89616
Posted on 2016-02-17 16:35:26
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Where can I go to meet her and ask her to make me a succubus? XD
april
>> #530826
Posted on 2024-01-03 11:18:33
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Transcript:
Something's wrong, but she couldn't put her finger on what it was, but it didn't matter though, she couldn't remember anything from her previous life before her beloved master made her a succubus, his succubus.
Just the thought of her master put her at the edge of cumming, but she couldn't until she showed her master her worth. "something master would like," she thought to herself. "More" was all she could say after thinking about her master.
She stood in an alley, still as naked as the day master made her, and visibility excited, her tail wagging and her wings twitching.
She saw a girl and her boyfriend, as they walked by the alley, she grabbed the girl and pulled her in, and pinned her to the ground.
"What the hell, who are you?"
"I'm master's succubus, and soon you will be my sister," she kissed her while ripping all her clothes off.
"What are you doing to her?"
"Go away; master won't like you."
"Yes," the boyfriend said as he walked away.
As she looked into the girl's now-glazed-over eyes, she came. she began rubbing her juices into the girl, slowly turning her into a succubus.
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