blue_hair braid breasts caption caption_only female_only femdom jinx_(lol) league_of_legends lip_biting long_hair looking_at_viewer manip pink_eyes pov pov_sub resisting small_breasts tattoo text twiggles6_(manipper) twintails

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Twiggles6
>> #69469
Posted on 2015-09-06 19:31:53
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This is my first attempt at manipping for this site, so please let me know if I screwed something up in the tags or if there are any other problems. I would very much like whatever constructive feedback can be offered here.

petkitsune
>> #69474
Posted on 2015-09-06 20:17:59
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Mhm, Jinx <3

Oel
>> #69478
Posted on 2015-09-06 20:42:02
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The text isn't up my alley (though still good!) but oh wow the picture of choice is great. Great job, ESPECIALLY for your first time!

Twiggles6
>> #69480
Posted on 2015-09-06 20:54:50
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Oel said:
The text isn't up my alley (though still good!) but oh wow the picture of choice is great. Great job, ESPECIALLY for your first time!


Actually, one of the things I was worried about was the text. I wanted to make sure that mind control was evident without explicitly stating it and I wasn't sure if I did that well enough. I appreciate the compliment, and think I might do more of these in the future. (Maybe even more League of Legends manips. :P)

Reversed1
>> #69499
Posted on 2015-09-06 23:32:34
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Twiggles6 said:
This is my first attempt at manipping for this site, so please let me know if I screwed something up in the tags or if there are any other problems. I would very much like whatever constructive feedback can be offered here.


For a first try, this isn't bad! I honestly like the text. I haven't really played a lot of LoL, but I know that this is pretty close to Jinx's actual personality.
There are plenty of threads on the forum that offer tips and tricks on making manips, I'd suggest going there.
Other than that, just experiment! And make sure to ask questions on how you can improve. It's what I've been doing, and I keep getting a little better each time.

Good luck! :D

Cowsinner
>> #69527
Posted on 2015-09-07 04:56:55
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*deep breath* Wuff!

Twiggles6
>> #69533
Posted on 2015-09-07 06:12:26
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Cowsinner said:
*deep breath* Wuff!


>_>...

I'll take that as a compliment. ^_^;

sonicfire65
>> #69571
Posted on 2015-09-07 18:30:55
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Twiggles6 said:
This is my first attempt at manipping for this site, so please let me know if I screwed something up in the tags or if there are any other problems. I would very much like whatever constructive feedback can be offered here.


You did great especially for your first time I would like to see more of your work

Mister Vi
>> #69608
Posted on 2015-09-07 23:32:34
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I like the idea of making just the word 'happy' the trigger it's cute it's elegant, and it makes listening to american pop radio quite the dangerous subject. good job twiggles.

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