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  • Id: 29384
  • Posted: 2015-09-19 00:37:38
    by rp16
  • Size: 1400x1200
  • Source: rp16
  • Rating: Explicit
  • Score: 16 (vote up)
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rp16
>> #70920
Posted on 2015-09-19 00:38:01
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My first hypno / nsfw art ever, sorry if it looks weird.
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #70921
Posted on 2015-09-19 00:46:06
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I personally think a "before and after" would've been nice to have to showcase the MC/hypnosis better, as the spirals are kinda hard to see in the eyes. Also, it looks fairly decent for your first time image, but as to critique it, the left arm and hand could use some more work next time, and the speech bubble on the right shouldn't be so huge as it leaves a lot of white negative space that kinda takes away from the image.
rp16
>> #80036
Posted on 2015-12-09 01:41:20
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
I personally think a "before and after" would've been nice to have to showcase the MC/hypnosis better, as the spirals are kinda hard to see in the eyes. Also, it looks fairly decent for your first time image, but as to critique it, the left arm and hand could use some more work next time, and the speech bubble on the right shouldn't be so huge as it leaves a lot of white negative space that kinda takes away from the image.


Thank for for the critique! I really appreciate it ;v; Sorry for the slow response tho ;;
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