apron blonde_hair body_markings bottomless breasts caption caption_only dog_girl exhibitionism female_only femsub flower food furry grey_hair hand_mark large_breasts licking maledom manip naked_apron nipples pussy spanking sparkvolley_(manipper) squirting tail text unaware undressing wolf_girl

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sparkvolley
>> #75671
Posted on 2015-11-01 04:20:41
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Was having trouble finding an image I wanted to write for, but when I found this, this morning, the story hit me like a ton of bricks. Did the story in about an hour and a half, and while I had a great Halloween, I could not wait to get home, edit the image and share it with hypnohub. Enjoy and feel free to leave feedback. :3

Neki
>> #75745
Posted on 2015-11-01 13:27:49
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I really love the story like writing, I just don't think your style suits my pleasures.

I think I simply enjoy them falling under rather then already being under. That is just my personal enjoyments.

I like it though! I have nothing negative to say, expect for all the negative/constructive things, which I am sure someone may point out in some other post, because I couldn't see anything!

OldHat
>> #75746
Posted on 2015-11-01 13:27:56
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An hour and a half? So that's why it's huge!
It's good, though.

sparkvolley
>> #75751
Posted on 2015-11-01 14:24:05
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Neki said:
I really love the story like writing, I just don't think your style suits my pleasures.

I think I simply enjoy them falling under rather then already being under. That is just my personal enjoyments.

I like it though! I have nothing negative to say, expect for all the negative/constructive things, which I am sure someone may point out in some other post, because I couldn't see anything!


Thank you so much for your kind words. You like the falling under part more than what happens after, did I understand that right? Well good news, I like both. I've just taken the approach you've mentioned with the first two. In the future, I will probably do some going under scenes as well. I just have not found an image since I've started doing these that has made me want to do a traditional falling under scene yet.

Again, thanks for the feedback and hopefully I'll produce a winner for you someday in the future. :3

sparkvolley
>> #75752
Posted on 2015-11-01 14:26:34
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OldHat said:
An hour and a half? So that's why it's huge!
It's good, though.


Thank you. :3

Yeah. Usually when I think I have a decent enough idea, I find it hard to stop writing once I get the motivation to start (and until I get burned out eventually). I was worried I wouldn't be able to make the text fit, but I think it worked out nicely after playing around with text sizes a bit.

HOLYROCKER
>> #211249
Posted on 2017-11-13 08:37:53
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Is it it just me or does the golden seem to have a ballsack?

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