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  • Id: 35956
  • Posted: 2016-04-23 08:52:52
    by dmcman
  • Size: 1238x758
  • Rating: Questionable
  • Score: 144 (vote up)
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dmcman
>> #100407
Posted on 2016-04-23 08:57:48
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My first upload. I hope I did everything right.
TheSpoon
>> #100414
Posted on 2016-04-23 10:02:35
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Maybe try a little harder on the eyes next time, my dude
MrMeatballs
>> #100423
Posted on 2016-04-23 12:01:51
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With the all caps and intense font, I can't help but imagine theyre yelling
Pinkanator
>> #100455
Posted on 2016-04-23 17:09:19
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MrMeatballs said:
With the all caps and intense font, I can't help but imagine theyre yelling


Thanks Linkara.
zach007
>> #100486
Posted on 2016-04-23 21:24:54
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Pinkanator said:
Thanks Linkara.


By the by, where'd he purchase that Magic Gun?
Pinkanator
>> #100497
Posted on 2016-04-23 21:55:58
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zach007 said:
By the by, where'd he purchase that Magic Gun?


I'd tell you, but that'd mean I'd have to buy the DVD.
greasyi
>> #100505
Posted on 2016-04-23 22:31:21
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WHEN THERE IS NO PUNCTUATION AND ALL
CAPS IT GETS HARD
*FLASH*
TO TELL WHAT IS HAPPENING EVEN
WITH THE BENEFIT OF MULTIPLE FONT COLORS
*FLASH*
AND GENERALLY IF THERE'S A LOT OF EMPTY
SPACE IN THE TEXT BOX THEN
MAKE THE WHOLE THING THINNER SO IT FITS
BETTER ON MORE SCREENS
*FLASH*
THE SUBJECT OF THE IMAGE IS WAY OVER
ON THE RIGHT SIDE SO IT DOESN'T MAKE
SENSE FOR THE TEXT TO BE ON THE LEFT
NOW MY EYES HAVE TO CROSS THIS NEGATIVE
SPACE IN ORDER TO GO BETWEEN
THE IMAGE AND TEXT

ALSO WHAT SPOON AND MEATBALLS SAID












HypnoMangaEditor
>> #100569
Posted on 2016-04-24 05:45:36
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Okay, since this is your fist upload, I am gonna be a little bit more lenient. :)

Things to consider:
- Font, Fontsize, Punctuation: A Better Font would be Wild Words, Anime Ace or general easy to read fonts. You used color coding for the text, which is great. Many people overlook this but it makes it easier to read. Without it, I wouldn't even know who is talking in this case.
- Position of Text manip: Wrong side. You want the text on the right side. Reason is that most of us read from left to right so we see the picture first, then look at the text. This is very important.
- Text Background: You used black. This is not always bad, but you got a very good chance in this picture to make a gradiant of the blue/greenish background color. If the text is on the other side, you should still use a much brighter background for the text, because the wall of black simply is a little bit too dark and the contrast is really harsh on the eye and the general mood of the picture.
- Eyes: Some say it could have been done better, I think it is decent for a first try. Then again, I am not into spiral eyes and do not know much about correctly implementing them. :)

Just try implementing these changes into your next manip and it will surely get a lot better. :)
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