That is the main problem I have with this picture. I like the eye edit - even though I find them a touch to oppresive, but no one is going to read that wall of text. It's impossible to read in the default picture size and still hard to read if you zoom in. What I would have done is make one block of text on the right, the other one on the left and then put some spaces in between a couple of sentences to make it easier to digest.
I like the coloring though. The Double text at the end with Madoka and Sayaka is a nice touch, but you could have also used one sentences instead of 2 overlapping ones, by using different font colors for the lower and upper half of the letters. It's artists choice though, so I won't hold it against you.
HypnoMangaEditor said: a whole bunch of stuff that i completely agree with
you really hit the nail on the head with what i ended up not liking about this manip. unfortunately the oppressive eye coloring on madoka was actually necessary, otherwise it would have ended up looking a lot worse, i seriously fucked around with that effect for like half an hour before going with what i did. i'm honestly really displeased with this whole thing, my writing feels really weak in this one too, but that might just be me looking for more problems than there are.
HypnoMangaEditor said: That is the main problem I have with this picture. I like the eye edit - even though I find them a touch to oppresive, but no one is going to read that wall of text. It's impossible to read in the default picture size and still hard to read if you zoom in. What I would have done is make one block of text on the right, the other one on the left and then put some spaces in between a couple of sentences to make it easier to digest.
I like the coloring though. The Double text at the end with Madoka and Sayaka is a nice touch, but you could have also used one sentences instead of 2 overlapping ones, by using different font colors for the lower and upper half of the letters. It's artists choice though, so I won't hold it against you.
I usually like text more than the pictures that go with them :)
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i wrote way too much
That is the main problem I have with this picture. I like the eye edit - even though I find them a touch to oppresive, but no one is going to read that wall of text. It's impossible to read in the default picture size and still hard to read if you zoom in. What I would have done is make one block of text on the right, the other one on the left and then put some spaces in between a couple of sentences to make it easier to digest.
I like the coloring though. The Double text at the end with Madoka and Sayaka is a nice touch, but you could have also used one sentences instead of 2 overlapping ones, by using different font colors for the lower and upper half of the letters. It's artists choice though, so I won't hold it against you.
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a whole bunch of stuff that i completely agree with
you really hit the nail on the head with what i ended up not liking about this manip. unfortunately the oppressive eye coloring on madoka was actually necessary, otherwise it would have ended up looking a lot worse, i seriously fucked around with that effect for like half an hour before going with what i did. i'm honestly really displeased with this whole thing, my writing feels really weak in this one too, but that might just be me looking for more problems than there are.
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no one is going to read that wall of text.
You underestimate us, I think. I personally enjoyed the writing. Formatting aside, the story was good. Please, keep writing.
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That is the main problem I have with this picture. I like the eye edit - even though I find them a touch to oppresive, but no one is going to read that wall of text. It's impossible to read in the default picture size and still hard to read if you zoom in. What I would have done is make one block of text on the right, the other one on the left and then put some spaces in between a couple of sentences to make it easier to digest.
I like the coloring though. The Double text at the end with Madoka and Sayaka is a nice touch, but you could have also used one sentences instead of 2 overlapping ones, by using different font colors for the lower and upper half of the letters. It's artists choice though, so I won't hold it against you.
I usually like text more than the pictures that go with them :)
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You underestimate us, I think. I personally enjoyed the writing. Formatting aside, the story was good. Please, keep writing.
I usually like text more than the pictures that go with them :)
Yeah, agreed with these two. :D "Too much text" is never a bad thing.