angel angel_girl blonde_hair bottomless breasts caption crown elf_ears empty_eyes female_only femsub ilias jewelry kneeling large_breasts long_hair magic magnifire manip masturbation mixibnorh_(manipper) monster_girl_quest nipples nude open_mouth pink_eyes pussy pussy_juice spread_legs text topless wings

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Bloodly
>> #110904
Posted on 2016-06-23 03:17:47
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So discorporate and throw off the crazy.

tradejack
>> #110943
Posted on 2016-06-23 08:16:39
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This is mostly grammarically correct. If you expect perfect comma use on a porn site, you're delusional xD.

NinjaW
>> #111006
Posted on 2016-06-23 19:53:27
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tradejack said:
This is mostly grammarically correct. If you expect perfect comma use on a porn site, you're delusional xD.



It's more than commas. There's a lot of issues with word choice and spelling. This site is actually pretty forgiving with punctuation (the fact that most of my manips remain up is proof of such)

shaymind
>> #111013
Posted on 2016-06-23 20:56:50
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Bloodly said:
So discorporate and throw off the crazy.


It depends on how hard discorporation is. If you hesitate, does it still work? If you know you should but can't make yourself want to, does it get you loose? Is there a cooldown? Do you need to focus to escape? It could be trivial, or it could be incredibly difficult under these conditions. Which it is remains to be seen.

Vanndril
>> #111363
Posted on 2016-06-26 05:29:37
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NinjaW said:
It's more than commas. There's a lot of issues with word choice and spelling. This site is actually pretty forgiving with punctuation (the fact that most of my manips remain up is proof of such)


I tend to judge punctuation and spelling by how well the point of the statements get across. Often times, perfect punctuation is unnecessary to allow the reader a perfect and clear understanding of what the statement is attempting to portray.

It's word choice and spelling that typically matters, as screwing up either of those can drastically confuse statements.

Here, I understand every statement made at least somewhat clearly, despite the mistakes here and there. So, all in all, this one's not really that bad. Just don't read it if you're a grammar nazi. That same logic applies to most captions, though. :P

SubmissiveMilla
>> #112229
Posted on 2016-07-01 15:29:30
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I say bring on the Ilias-sub.

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