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Hentila
>> #121135
Posted on 2016-08-23 20:25:54
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Reuploaded the pic with more (hopefully) readable text :P
PolishGuy
>> #121257
Posted on 2016-08-24 02:33:21
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At first I saw this and I was like "WTF, I don't remember uploading anything today"
Then I clicked it and realized it was just something that looked like one of my manips.

Good job.
Hentila
>> #121266
Posted on 2016-08-24 03:06:07
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PolishGuy said:
At first I saw this and I was like "WTF, I don't remember uploading anything today"
Then I clicked it and realized it was just something that looked like one of my manips.

Good job.


Thanks! Your manips are also great :D
Relanor
>> #121304
Posted on 2016-08-24 04:06:13
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Almost fantastic, just not enough flare. Nothing sexy about this- you need allure.
Hentila
>> #121306
Posted on 2016-08-24 04:12:05
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Relanor said:
Almost fantastic, just not enough flare. Nothing sexy about this- you need allure.


What exactly do you mean?
Hypnofootslave
>> #121668
Posted on 2016-08-25 18:13:16
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Hentila said:
What exactly do you mean?
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She means that it's too "blunt" of you know what I mean, it's not really "hypnotizing" or like Relanor said, "alluring" It needs to have an origin of some sorts and it needs more detail and thoroughness
Cradily
>> #121679
Posted on 2016-08-25 20:28:17
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I'm not sure of the exact allure of feet so I can't give you any pointers on that, but some potential issues I see:

- the story focuses on the feet, yet in the picture the foot is sort of off-center/off-focus, and the other foot is cut off entirely. Using another image may be a better fit for your story.

- the other (more minor/nitpicky) thing is the text layout, the coma should not be at the start of a new line, al you want -> all you want, and I think that font is Times New Roman? It gives a stiff/professional look, instead of maybe a teasing/dominate feel you're going for here.
Sirloin
>> #121681
Posted on 2016-08-25 20:30:10
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Maybe the picture cuts off there and they just went with what they had...?
Hentila
>> #121689
Posted on 2016-08-25 21:58:08
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Sirloin said:
Maybe the picture cuts off there and they just went with what they had...?

yep, that was the only reasonable good pic I could find .-. and about the comma thing, I only noticed it after posting, and I was like "fuck it! Too lazy to fix it"
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