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SilentFive
>> #128456
Posted on 2016-09-29 09:00:18
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Okay, so, first time really doing this type of art (I'm a cartoonist by hobby), or uploading on here in general, and while I got the general gist of the tags, please let me know if I'm missing any.

alalap
>> #128458
Posted on 2016-09-29 09:04:43
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SilentFive
>> #128463
Posted on 2016-09-29 09:19:10
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alalap said:
imgur.com/tIvEqdH


I would say par for the course for my first upload on here.

Posted on 2016-09-29 09:19:21
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It's... Alright for a start I guess. Yeah I get that it's cartooning, but the body parts are really just too thinned and stretched out. I'll figure out if I feel like running it by QCC at some point, but for now I'm just feeling... "Eh."

SilentFive
>> #128466
Posted on 2016-09-29 09:21:18
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
It's... Alright for a start I guess. Yeah I get that it's cartooning, but the body parts are really just too thinned and stretched out. I'll figure out if I feel like running it by QCC at some point, but for now I'm just feeling... "Eh."


It was a drawing I've had sitting in my desk that I wanted to upload for a while, but just now got around to. "Eh" is probably the most appropriate reaction. It's not the best, but it's serviceable.

Posted on 2016-09-29 09:29:25
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SilentFive said:
It was a drawing I've had sitting in my desk that I wanted to upload for a while, but just now got around to. "Eh" is probably the most appropriate reaction. It's not the best, but it's serviceable.


I doubt it'll get removed (hence why me running it by mods is really not a big deal), but please, if you continue to upload stuff here do keep my advice in mind as far as improving it to an extent. And the "eh" is more or less my mood rn; I'm tired man...

SilentFive
>> #128472
Posted on 2016-09-29 09:48:17
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
I doubt it'll get removed (hence why me running it by mods is really not a big deal), but please, if you continue to upload stuff here do keep my advice in mind as far as improving it to an extent. And the "eh" is more or less my mood rn; I'm tired man...


Well, you had very good constructive criticism. I do plan on improvements in general with art (Required with something I'm going into), and you've given me some of the best feedback I've had on any site.

VioletRiot
>> #128480
Posted on 2016-09-29 10:04:29
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Despite the fixes that were suggested above, I really wanna say I like the idea of this character. Cyborg limbs are one of the coolest things in my book!

SilentFive
>> #128488
Posted on 2016-09-29 10:18:13
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VioletRiot said:
Despite the fixes that were suggested above, I really wanna say I like the idea of this character. Cyborg limbs are one of the coolest things in my book!


Thank you! I call her Cybris.

DouDile
>> #128603
Posted on 2016-09-30 03:24:25
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One piece body xD!!!

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