The problem with this picture is the faces. The lips need more definition as now they're incomplete lines which has strange implications. uh... As it is with how it' looks my head thinks they're in neutral position and more a generally DERP position with how their head's are tilted at an odd angle (rotationally) like that.
Also Something really feels off about Alice's Torso. Maybe it's the pose but it seems like it's almost too long. I can't put my finger completely on it but something about it just in my head screaming WRONG
At least Patchy's getting some fun stuff.
Edit: The crease for her naval goes on Way too far! That's what the most obvious issue is. Marisa's size is better.
Unless Alice had really nasty long scar there it's not supposed to be that long.
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Myuk wanted a futanari version =p
Good!
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Also Something really feels off about Alice's Torso. Maybe it's the pose but it seems like it's almost too long. I can't put my finger completely on it but something about it just in my head screaming WRONG
At least Patchy's getting some fun stuff.
Edit: The crease for her naval goes on Way too far! That's what the most obvious issue is. Marisa's size is better.
Unless Alice had really nasty long scar there it's not supposed to be that long.
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Not that i'm complaining, but i've been keeping an eagle eye out for roukishin to come back, so i often notice these things.
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Yakai's work looks a lot like Roukishin.
Not that i'm complaining, but i've been keeping an eagle eye out for roukishin to come back, so i often notice these things.
How does it look like Roukishin ?