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henrik.
>> #147652
Posted on 2017-01-01 23:02:37
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Long time lurker here.
Decided to make one myself for once,..
Tell me what you think
hypnofan100
>> #147663
Posted on 2017-01-01 23:45:08
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I think it's good. For a first attempt definitely alright. Some spelling errors here and there but nothing major. Definitely looking forward to your posts on the hub so I can get a more comprehensive picture of your style and technique.
All in all verdict : more please
LmaoBobobo
>> #147665
Posted on 2017-01-01 23:49:15
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hypnofan100 said:
Some spelling errors here and there but nothing major.


Care to list a few? I couldn't find any myself.
DrgnmastrAlex
>> #147672
Posted on 2017-01-02 00:11:21
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For a first attempt, nice femdom caption. ^^
hypnofan100
>> #147685
Posted on 2017-01-02 00:42:56
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LmaoBobobo said:
Care to list a few? I couldn't find any myself.


The word servant is spelled inconsistently. In the 5th paragraph it is spelled with a capital s where only one paragraph beneath it is spelled without.
I haven't found any else but I am not that good at spotting mistakes myself.
1kcubder
>> #155198
Posted on 2017-02-09 05:40:14
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I'm always creeped out by ahri hypnosis, knowing what she does to her victims and all.
hypnodudley
>> #194196
Posted on 2017-08-19 06:40:00
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Ahri doesn't eat people anymore.
"She had reservations about actions which never troubled her as a fox. She realized that she could not overcome the pangs of her evolving morality. In search of a solution, Ahri found the Institute of War, home of the most gifted mages on Runeterra. They offered her a chance to attain her humanity without further harm through service in the League of Legends."
I don't know if this means she has to stay there to maintain her humanity, or if she just had to be there for a while to complete her transformation.
iWillObey
>> #326674
Posted on 2019-07-13 14:13:00
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You don't need to split the different people speaking into different columns - there's plenty of space to have it in one column, and the colours make it clear enough who's talking...

Great manip though!
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