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Posted: 2017-01-19 17:04:54
by vahn_yourdoom - Size: 1120x1682
- Rating: Explicit
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>> #151394
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>> #151454
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Starting from the second line, it should probably either be "I didn't," or "I'm not," depending on whether the guy is trying to say "I didn't (kidnap you)" or "I'm not (kidnapping you)". "I don't," only works if the unspoken follow up is something like, "I don't (kidnap people in general)", because the "do" in "don't" wasn't put in the past tense so he can't be referring to a specific action from the past.
Third line should probably be "I did...?" because the following action already happened so "do" needs to be in past tense.
Then fourth line would be "Yep you did" because "do" still needs to be in past tense.
And finally fifth line would be "I did follow you here..." because "do" needs to be in past tense, and since "follow" now has a proper helper verb, it doesn't change to its past tense but stays in the infinitive.
>> #151481
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IFFFYYYYYYY <3
AGREED
>> #151600
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The grammar issues kind of got to me so I'll try to explain them. I love your stuff and it's enjoyable regardless so please don't take this the wrong way.
Starting from the second line, it should probably either be "I didn't," or "I'm not," depending on whether the guy is trying to say "I didn't (kidnap you)" or "I'm not (kidnapping you)". "I don't," only works if the unspoken follow up is something like, "I don't (kidnap people in general)", because the "do" in "don't" wasn't put in the past tense so he can't be referring to a specific action from the past.
Third line should probably be "I did...?" because the following action already happened so "do" needs to be in past tense.
Then fourth line would be "Yep you did" because "do" still needs to be in past tense.
And finally fifth line would be "I did follow you here..." because "do" needs to be in past tense, and since "follow" now has a proper helper verb, it doesn't change to its past tense but stays in the infinitive.
thanks for fixing them!! I'll fix it for the version for my patrons :)
>> #151608
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thanks for fixing them!! I'll fix it for the version for my patrons :)
it's kinda sad that you're only fixing it for the patrons though, let's say whoever just fixed it for you isnt a patron and won't even get the fixed version, that's cruel :v
>> #151640
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it's kinda sad that you're only fixing it for the patrons though, let's say whoever just fixed it for you isnt a patron and won't even get the fixed version, that's cruel :v
check the comment of this post in around 2 days, then, i'll give you guys whose is interested a dropbox link to the fixed version :)
>> #151657
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check the comment of this post in around 2 days, then, i'll give you guys whose is interested a dropbox link to the fixed version :)
Yay <3
>> #151774
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check the comment of this post in around 2 days, then, i'll give you guys whose is interested a dropbox link to the fixed version :)
Count me in as interested.
>> #152142
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Yay <3
Count me in as interested.
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