Soooooooo my buddy Eaglet1 bought me Tales of Berseria for my birthday last month. Haven't gotten very far in it yet, but I can safely say that Seres' ridiculous rack has gone a long way towards selling me on it.
Like goddamn, redhead, massive cleavage window, heels, legs for days, possibly the biggest breasts in the game, AND a stern, serious personality that'd look great as a happy, hypnotized moron?
SIGN ME THE HELL UP
Anyway, enjoy! Check the child post here: hypnohub.net/post/show/45..._expansion-erect_nipples- for the textless version if anyone's interested in coming up with their own ideas for it. And as always, commissions are open.
As a hardcore Tales fan and someone who's beaten Tales of Berseria, I can honestly say this leaves me conflicted...
God damn it, Zarvex, why couldn't you have just stuck with characters that don't have [spoilers]tragic back stories that earned my respect[/spoiler] like Skyla or something...?
The text is good. However, my eyes watered reading it. Lowering the contrast between text and background (and lowering the saturation) a bit would make it easier to read.
Mr_Scade said: I am really enjoying this dialogue. It is truly enjoyable.
Glad to hear it! Though, to be fair, Eaglet1 is the one who came up with it, I just tweaked it a bit and put it into the picture.
Imasuky said: This is great but I have to say something about her waist just seems off to me.
That one small thing aside it's pretty great.
I think I know what you mean, though I haven't been able to figure it out myself yet. Thanks very much for the tipoff tho!
LillyTank said: As a hardcore Tales fan and someone who's beaten Tales of Berseria, I can honestly say this leaves me conflicted...
God damn it, Zarvex, why couldn't you have just stuck with characters that don't have [spoilers]tragic back stories that earned my respect[/spoiler] like Skyla or something...?
Also do you do commissions cause I'm interested.
I completely understand where you're coming from...which is probably why I decided to get this stuff done now, before I get into the story for real, and then I lose the willingness to hypnotize her. CUZ I'M PRETTY SURE HER BACKSTORY WILL BE SAD AS HELL.
Otherwise heck yeah I do commissions, I'm open year round. Shoot me a message ASAP and we can discuss the details!
temena said: The text is good. However, my eyes watered reading it. Lowering the contrast between text and background (and lowering the saturation) a bit would make it easier to read.
Whoops, that one's on me, yeah. I think I may have to adjust my desktop's screen colors, because it didn't look THIS eye-burning when I worked it over in SAI. Generally I change text colors all the time between pics, looking for the right one, so it's hit or miss. I think it was kind of a miss here because OW, my EYES, but otherwise, thanks very much for the tip!
glub said: Ay man, always been a fan of your work and the creative dialogue :)
Thank you! I can't take full credit for the text though, I just come up with the prompts for it, and let writers like Eaglet1 or DisguisedHypnotist expand it out into amazing stuff like this.
I think I know what you mean, though I haven't been able to figure it out myself yet. Thanks very much for the tipoff tho!
I think I've figured out what it is, it's the lines right under her ribs they make things look to sunk in. I'd normally not say anything but I like this a lot so that makes the little detail bug me more than usual.
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Like goddamn, redhead, massive cleavage window, heels, legs for days, possibly the biggest breasts in the game, AND a stern, serious personality that'd look great as a happy, hypnotized moron?
SIGN ME THE HELL UP
Anyway, enjoy! Check the child post here: hypnohub.net/post/show/45..._expansion-erect_nipples- for the textless version if anyone's interested in coming up with their own ideas for it. And as always, commissions are open.
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That one small thing aside it's pretty great.
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God damn it, Zarvex, why couldn't you have just stuck with characters that don't have [spoilers]tragic back stories that earned my respect[/spoiler] like Skyla or something...?
Also do you do commissions cause I'm interested.
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I am really enjoying this dialogue. It is truly enjoyable.
Glad to hear it! Though, to be fair, Eaglet1 is the one who came up with it, I just tweaked it a bit and put it into the picture.
This is great but I have to say something about her waist just seems off to me.
That one small thing aside it's pretty great.
I think I know what you mean, though I haven't been able to figure it out myself yet. Thanks very much for the tipoff tho!
As a hardcore Tales fan and someone who's beaten Tales of Berseria, I can honestly say this leaves me conflicted...
God damn it, Zarvex, why couldn't you have just stuck with characters that don't have [spoilers]tragic back stories that earned my respect[/spoiler] like Skyla or something...?
Also do you do commissions cause I'm interested.
I completely understand where you're coming from...which is probably why I decided to get this stuff done now, before I get into the story for real, and then I lose the willingness to hypnotize her. CUZ I'M PRETTY SURE HER BACKSTORY WILL BE SAD AS HELL.
Otherwise heck yeah I do commissions, I'm open year round. Shoot me a message ASAP and we can discuss the details!
The text is good. However, my eyes watered reading it. Lowering the contrast between text and background (and lowering the saturation) a bit would make it easier to read.
Whoops, that one's on me, yeah. I think I may have to adjust my desktop's screen colors, because it didn't look THIS eye-burning when I worked it over in SAI. Generally I change text colors all the time between pics, looking for the right one, so it's hit or miss. I think it was kind of a miss here because OW, my EYES, but otherwise, thanks very much for the tip!
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Ay man, always been a fan of your work and the creative dialogue :)
Thank you! I can't take full credit for the text though, I just come up with the prompts for it, and let writers like Eaglet1 or DisguisedHypnotist expand it out into amazing stuff like this.
Still, glad to hear you like it!
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I think I know what you mean, though I haven't been able to figure it out myself yet. Thanks very much for the tipoff tho!
I think I've figured out what it is, it's the lines right under her ribs they make things look to sunk in. I'd normally not say anything but I like this a lot so that makes the little detail bug me more than usual.