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T323
>> #160450
Posted on 2017-03-09 09:50:11
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johnsmith
>> #160475
Posted on 2017-03-09 16:08:07
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I hate it when my "wold" explodes
T323
>> #160486
Posted on 2017-03-09 19:08:24
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johnsmith said:
I hate it when my "wold" explodes


I am so embarassed right now. I re-read this manip for two times, and still... Mda.
Bokasa
>> #160505
Posted on 2017-03-09 20:46:56
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T323 said:
I am so embarassed right now. I re-read this manip for two times, and still... Mda.


A che tam
OverlordMiles
>> #160565
Posted on 2017-03-10 03:24:59
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You were really close to a hot manip here but I feel like the intro could've been shortened to compensate for what happens after he looks for the first time. He just kind of compliments her and they leave, and I feel like there was a lot more potential for that if you chose to dedicate more words to it.
T323
>> #160575
Posted on 2017-03-10 04:49:51
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OverlordMiles said:
You were really close to a hot manip here but I feel like the intro could've been shortened to compensate for what happens after he looks for the first time. He just kind of compliments her and they leave, and I feel like there was a lot more potential for that if you chose to dedicate more words to it.


I really like long introductions for some reason. Don't really know why... Maybe because "lemons" aren't that important.
Or maybe cuz I suck at planning.
Niyla
>> #163786
Posted on 2017-03-25 11:11:41
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I just edited the "consensual" tag off of something else and wanted to make sure I wasn't missing something. Why is this tagged "consensual"?
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