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johnsmith
>> #161048
Posted on 2017-03-12 17:17:59
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I think you overuse ellipses, I'd practice trying to cut them out as much as possible. There's also kind of a lot of grammar issues here, ("How I met her?", "and am 16 now", "she once singed", "flyes", "I just humming", "Mistress are not", '"poor" I am or not', "Is Mistress rewards me?", "over tasks to attend", "you want me too lay", etc.) you might want to try to edit these more carefully or run them by some people before you post them.
T323
>> #161049
Posted on 2017-03-12 17:26:24
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johnsmith said:
I think you overuse ellipses, I'd practice trying to cut them out as much as possible. There's also kind of a lot of grammar issues here, ("How I met her?", "and am 16 now", "she once singed", "flyes", "I just humming", "Mistress are not", '"poor" I am or not', "Is Mistress rewards me?", "over tasks to attend", "you want me too lay", etc.) you might want to try to edit these more carefully or run them by some people before you post them.


Thank you for help.
AngelGrace
>> #161128
Posted on 2017-03-12 23:59:29
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Ugh I love sirens
jimskog
>> #161720
Posted on 2017-03-15 04:56:41
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AngelGrace said:
Ugh I love sirens


It does seem she is a harpy. Sirens are usually the mermaid variant.
Xelrog
>> #161721
Posted on 2017-03-15 05:08:52
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jimskog said:
It does seem she is a harpy. Sirens are usually the mermaid variant.


Actually, Sirens were traditionally associated with bird features, as well.

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siren_(mythology)#Appearance
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