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temena
>> #161340
Posted on 2017-03-13 20:22:48
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While I slightly avoid furry, the story is very hot. More than makes it up for me.

cypress_z
>> #161595
Posted on 2017-03-14 21:00:15
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temena said:
While I slightly avoid furry, the story is very hot. More than makes it up for me.


Same.

Bitshift
>> #161599
Posted on 2017-03-14 21:04:24
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Heh, seem to get that a lot. Glad it's good enough to draw some people in.

cypress_z
>> #161606
Posted on 2017-03-14 21:22:52
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Bitshift said:
Heh, seem to get that a lot. Glad it's good enough to draw some people in.


Well, I'm more or less furry neutral; it doesn't do anything for me or turn me off. Story is the important thing. I tend to avoid commenting on pony stuff because - well, ponies, but I don't particularly care what characters are.

The format and outcome are all very hot either way, I particularly like cumming used to melt the brain. I definitely hope you do more with basically any fictional character.

Bitshift
>> #161612
Posted on 2017-03-14 21:34:16
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I'm glad but amused that people are liking the story because it's the thing I like least about the set. I love the IDEA (That's why this happened), but the actual writing is pretty terrible, to the point where I was considering just uploading a few of the strongest images without text. Sounds like the fun of the concept has survived my writing though, so great.

And thanks. No guarantees, but knowing there's an audience definitely helps.

anonymind
>> #161642
Posted on 2017-03-14 23:42:01
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Bitshift said:
Heh, seem to get that a lot. Glad it's good enough to draw some people in.


I know what you mean.

temena
>> #161817
Posted on 2017-03-15 16:30:56
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Bitshift said:
I'm glad but amused that people are liking the story because it's the thing I like least about the set. I love the IDEA (That's why this happened), but the actual writing is pretty terrible, to the point where I was considering just uploading a few of the strongest images without text. Sounds like the fun of the concept has survived my writing though, so great.

And thanks. No guarantees, but knowing there's an audience definitely helps.


The writing is ... well, rather good for the median of this site. I mean, it's not trilby-else, but I won't call it bad. Quick and dirty, but there's nothing wrong with that.

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