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AwkwardArtist
>> #164362
Posted on 2017-03-28 23:56:02
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Hope I put in all the needed tags.

I made their eyes with a slight glow, hoping that'll be enough to keep this from getting flagged - if it gets flagged I'll look at recommendations to improve this piece.

Bokasa
>> #164366
Posted on 2017-03-29 00:14:53
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Lovely work with light

dark_phoenix
>> #164397
Posted on 2017-03-29 02:30:47
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AwkwardArtist said:
Hope I put in all the needed tags.

I made their eyes with a slight glow, hoping that'll be enough to keep this from getting flagged - if it gets flagged I'll look at recommendations to improve this piece.


I do think you need to make it a bit more prominent. If I wasn't told they had a glow, I wouldn't have noticed it (and some artists put a glow on the eyes no matter what). Maybe have the glow extend past their iris, like into the sclera?

AwkwardArtist
>> #164400
Posted on 2017-03-29 03:03:45
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dark_phoenix said:
I do think you need to make it a bit more prominent. If I wasn't told they had a glow, I wouldn't have noticed it (and some artists put a glow on the eyes no matter what). Maybe have the glow extend past their iris, like into the sclera?


It actually does, it goes past the eye, the lines are discolored blue and gold respectively. The thing is, it's harder to tell because recently my computer died and I'm using one I'm unfamiliar with, the version of the program isn't the same as I've been using, and doesn't have the layer type I usually use for glow. So the layer type, the glow doesn't really show up on white.

If this does get flagged, I'll just pull this image onto my computer once it's fixed and adjust the layer type so that it is what I normally use for glowing, and hopefully it will be enough for a fix.

If it doesn't get flagged, it's a non-issue anyway. :)

Thank you for the suggestion, though! I do appreciate it.

greasyi
>> #232285
Posted on 2018-02-04 18:10:57
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I feel like this needs either more in the art, or a story with it, or something. A year after the fact without the artist having put lots of similar pics up in the meantime, I'm not going to flag it; but I totally would have when it was new.

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