Posted on 2017-06-30 10:22:15
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so this is a bit old since I did it a while ago, sorry for the *insert action here* stuff especially at the end, but I still think it's good enough to go. It's half back and forth conversations and half my pov style

Posted on 2017-06-30 10:38:46
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:/
Seems...quite frankly, terrible induction.

Posted on 2017-06-30 10:42:16
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Not bad, could use a little rewriting, but I like it :P

Posted on 2017-06-30 13:15:33
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The two text colors are too similar to easily distinguish...