before_and_after bodysuit brown_hair comic dark_skin female_only femsub hoodie mask original overwatch pink_eyes prosthetic_limb shennanigma symbiote symmetra text transformation transparent_background

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MultiLimbedXeno
>> #220664
Posted on 2017-12-17 22:32:17
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From description: A good friend of mine, monsterhunterfree.deviantart.com, who commissioned Shennanigma to have my OC Jasmine step on some slime and turn into Symmetra from Overwatch. Love this gift

Argonis
>> #220666
Posted on 2017-12-17 22:34:08
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thought that was the boy from undertail.

nack58
>> #220875
Posted on 2017-12-19 01:14:07
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I like the colors and the general artistry, though I'm not a fan of the single image transition style, though I get that a lot of people do. That said, the one thing that bothers me here is that if you remove the final image, there's no clue anywhere in the first three images what this person is transforming in to. The first image is normal, the second is them stepping in to tar or mercury, and the third is them being engulfed by whatever they step in. At the end, they transform in to a goopy, shiny Symmetra, which is cool, it's just there's no real transition. At the very least the third image could show some highlights along their chest or their shoes transforming in to something more akin to Symmetra's outfit. If I'd gotten this commissioned, I would have done a second panel halfway between panels 2 and 3, and then gotten the third panel to be halfway in to the final panel so it was clear or at least hinted by then what they were transforming in to. It's still a good image, I just feel there was more "story" here to tell and instead we got images that could have been skipped.

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