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TA75
>> #222077
Posted on 2017-12-23 08:20:07
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Hi I'm new to this manipping thing. Please feel free to let me know how it is or give feedback! Thanks!

Chidadow
>> #222103
Posted on 2017-12-23 10:11:26
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Great first post! Keep them coming. Merry Christmas

Grima180
>> #222104
Posted on 2017-12-23 10:12:03
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This is really quite good composition. It's solid all around, good spacing and color on the text and everything. If I really try to reach for any kind of criticism to give, maybe bump the text just a hair farther down from the top in the future? It's super nit-picky though, this is honestly quite well done.

TA75
>> #222105
Posted on 2017-12-23 10:37:57
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Thanks that means a lot; I was really nervous posting for the first time haha.

Agreed the text could be a tad farther down. I'll keep that in mind when I'm fiddling with the text right before submitting again.

I forgot to mention: I could use some feedback on one I am working on. If I could PM someone about it that would be suuper helpful!

Kyu
>> #222112
Posted on 2017-12-23 11:58:12
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i would do her homework too >.<

BurningPenguin6
>> #222147
Posted on 2017-12-23 18:28:38
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Oh dang, this is some good shit.

chocobosage85
>> #222153
Posted on 2017-12-23 19:03:31
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Oh, very nice! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more your stuff TA75.
(And the math geek in me is gratified as well; the math on the blackboard is correct, at least the bits that are visible, haha.)

OverlordMiles
>> #222169
Posted on 2017-12-23 20:37:51
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Definitely turned out fantastically!

cdyoung
>> #222186
Posted on 2017-12-23 22:46:10
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How about there being nothing but text being added to an otherwise normal artwork, as a criticism?

Grima180
>> #222201
Posted on 2017-12-23 23:25:44
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cdyoung said:
How about there being nothing but text being added to an otherwise normal artwork, as a criticism?


Uh, welcome to roughly half of manips I guess?

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