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Egglepurt
>> #237671
Posted on 2018-03-03 21:51:45
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Hey guys, it's me, another weird person with this weird fetish we all share. Just commenting to make it clear that I am new to making this kind of stuff, so a little less harsh judgement would be appreciated. If you don't like my stuff, let me know what I'm doing wrong so I can improve. That's all, thanks.
ayylmao112
>> #237673
Posted on 2018-03-03 22:07:00
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well uh, couldya try and make the text bigger...? Cuz right now with the size and the color, it's REALLY hard to read.
Kekyoin
>> #237706
Posted on 2018-03-04 00:34:48
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ayylmao112 said:
well uh, couldya try and make the text bigger...? Cuz right now with the size and the color, it's REALLY hard to read.


What they said. The image is far too small. But aside from that, the grammar is (Mostly.) fine.
shinylamp
>> #237722
Posted on 2018-03-04 02:41:23
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Mommy @-@
mariosonicfan
>> #237730
Posted on 2018-03-04 03:03:37
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I...absolutely love this, great little story that hits all my buttons. But then again maybe I'm biased
Stroke
>> #237735
Posted on 2018-03-04 03:17:49
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Make sure to add the artist name and egglepurt_(manipper) to the tags when you post. Got you covered for the moment. If the artist isn't already a tag on the Hub (which happens a lot), you enter the tag as art:artistname.
kingcrab007
>> #237879
Posted on 2018-03-04 23:42:10
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Nice picture. Nice caption. Unzips.
FancyAddiction
>> #238007
Posted on 2018-03-05 23:58:55
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I dig it.
This is more of a nitpick, but I'd suggest making and spacing paragraphs. Makes it so much easier to follow. At least for me, but Im fuckin' weird sooooo *shrugs*
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