Posted on 2018-03-31 23:44:50
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I'm attempting to translate this doujin for Nell, but as always my JP sucks so if you spot any errors or weird wording, feel free to fix.

Posted on 2018-04-01 00:39:52
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I'm excited for this. There are a few points where the phrasing is a little awkward, but that's easily fixed later. Just getting a decent translation is 90% of the battle. Thanks for your effort, and best of luck.

Posted on 2018-04-01 02:11:43
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Oh man, I love this doujin, her faces and postures are just the fucking best aaaa

Posted on 2018-04-01 22:46:49
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Yeah, I have problems trying to keep the phrasing too literal >< At least as long as others can understand most of it they can fix it later.



I totally agree. The text/story is pretty meh but it is still one of my favourite hypno doujins from the art alone.

Posted on 2018-04-06 23:06:14
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Would you mind if I hard translated this using your translation? I might change some lines for space/readability, but would stick to your basic script.

Posted on 2018-04-06 23:44:25
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I hear you guys saying this is a spectacular doujin but from this frame by itself I can't really tell if she's brainwashed or just bored lol.

Posted on 2018-04-07 11:36:12
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Go nuts! I'd be interested in seeing the text improved (too lazy to do it myself).



And both scenarios are still nice =P