theheckle said: The only reason these two pages exist is because I wanted to see if I could make a comic. This is basically an experiment.
Well it's good for a experimental comic. I like how the mind control helmet turns from grey to orange to red, almost as if it's heating up and frying her brain.
Allister said: Well, it's a first attempt and not too bad. I think the dialog's a little generic, but we all gotta start somewhere.
Eh, I wasn't trying too hard with the dialogue. This was mostly about seeing how a comic made in DAZ 3D would come out visually. I have done other comics with a mind control focus before (a series called "Making Friends" I posted on DeviantArt), but those were done in kisekae. For the record, the DAZ 3D stuff sort of makes me miss kisekae, mainly there wasn't a half hour render time per panel. Anyway, thank you, and if I do another one of these I'll focus a bit more on making better dialogue.
Lavitts said: I don't mean to offend if you weren't aiming for it, but you hit the funny mark dead on. I laffed.
Wasn't really aiming for humor except in the previous page, where the woman asks her unseen captor, "…you’re fucking with me, aren’t you?" Either way, I'm not offended, and I'm glad you got a laugh or two.
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The only reason these two pages exist is because I wanted to see if I could make a comic. This is basically an experiment.
Well it's good for a experimental comic. I like how the mind control helmet turns from grey to orange to red, almost as if it's heating up and frying her brain.
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Well, it's a first attempt and not too bad. I think the dialog's a little generic, but we all gotta start somewhere.
Eh, I wasn't trying too hard with the dialogue. This was mostly about seeing how a comic made in DAZ 3D would come out visually. I have done other comics with a mind control focus before (a series called "Making Friends" I posted on DeviantArt), but those were done in kisekae. For the record, the DAZ 3D stuff sort of makes me miss kisekae, mainly there wasn't a half hour render time per panel.
Anyway, thank you, and if I do another one of these I'll focus a bit more on making better dialogue.
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I don't mean to offend if you weren't aiming for it, but you hit the funny mark dead on.
I laffed.
Wasn't really aiming for humor except in the previous page, where the woman asks her unseen captor, "…you’re fucking with me, aren’t you?" Either way, I'm not offended, and I'm glad you got a laugh or two.
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