barefoot blush caption caption_only cunnilingus doki_doki_literature_club empty_eyes female_pov femdom femsub looking_at_viewer manip mistpirit monika nail_polish natsuki_(doki_doki_literature_club) open_mouth oral pink_eyes pink_hair pov pov_sub purple_hair pussy pussy_juice sexuality_change text toenail_polish tongue tongue_out viperhawkz_(manipper) yuri yuri_(doki_doki_literature_club)

8 comments (0 hidden)

grimest
>> #269122
Posted on 2018-07-09 00:29:14
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as a manipper who still commits this mistake from time to time take this advice: please remember to use more clear, strong colors in the text, so it might be easier to read, this way the text jumps to the viewer's sight.
Cute manip and lovely tale, the hub needs more Doki Doki ;)

Uxantro
>> #269160
Posted on 2018-07-09 08:27:11
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While I agree that the colors could be a bit stronger, I definitely am more focused on the well written tale you weaved. I certainly can't wait for more

Leo_Jochi
>> #269196
Posted on 2018-07-09 13:06:46
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this is actually so realistic i can believe this wud have happened if monika had access to this site

grashok
>> #269241
Posted on 2018-07-09 22:27:42
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*Protag comes in Has Threeway*
Monika:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*Yuri.chr deleted*
*Natsuki.chr deleted*

b00m
>> #269679
Posted on 2018-07-12 06:15:53
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Yes, this is very realistic, but there is still a problem: Monika said she wasn't very good at editing files.
If she was, this could be a logical ending ;)

Taunka
>> #269686
Posted on 2018-07-12 06:27:37
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b00m said:
Yes, this is very realistic, but there is still a problem: Monika said she wasn't very good at editing files.
If she was, this could be a logical ending ;)

Something illogical in this site? OMG I'm gonna faint

Sky
>> #269926
Posted on 2018-07-13 13:31:49
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Why was i reading this in the game grump voices?

animelover489
>> #299561
Posted on 2019-01-18 01:10:19
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Interesting story you added, I like it

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