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IDPet
>> #279788
Posted on 2018-09-09 23:18:14
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I didn't find a proofreader.
Let me know If there are spelling problems in order to re-upload a fixed version.
Obscenario
>> #279793
Posted on 2018-09-09 23:27:24
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I’m half tempted to flag this ‘no hypno’ just because it’s too close to the real Aqua.
AmateurThrowaway
>> #279795
Posted on 2018-09-09 23:32:25
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Obscenario said:
I’m half tempted to flag this ‘no hypno’ just because it’s too close to the real Aqua.


No bully Aqua
Sophia
>> #279800
Posted on 2018-09-10 00:27:19
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Reminds me of pink and myself sometimes, neato
EltonMSO
>> #279813
Posted on 2018-09-10 03:31:12
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IDPet said:
I didn't find a proofreader.


I'm willing to proofread for you if you'd like.
In this one there weren't any big mistakes but...
The second line should be 'It is time'
Last line of that block should be 'keep' instead of 'keeping'

Loved the story btw ;)
IDPet
>> #279815
Posted on 2018-09-10 03:52:15
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EltonMSO said:
I'm willing to proofread for you if you'd like.
In this one there weren't any big mistakes but...
The second line should be 'It is time'
Last line of that block should be 'keep' instead of 'keeping'

Loved the story btw ;)


Thank you very much, since there aren't big mistakes this time, I'll fix it just with notes.

Can I ask you the next time to proofread? I would appreciate it
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