So while I really love your work, I have one issue with it that hasn't been looking to fix itself. So, literally my only complaint.
The way you do spirals in the eyes. It's always flat and originating from the dead center of the eye, even if the character was just a second ago looking to the side with highlights in their eyes.
I can understand highlights being incredibly hard of impossible, but having the center of the spiral appear where their iris was will I think make it look a lot more professional.
EoD said: So while I really love your work, I have one issue with it that hasn't been looking to fix itself. So, literally my only complaint.
The way you do spirals in the eyes. It's always flat and originating from the dead center of the eye, even if the character was just a second ago looking to the side with highlights in their eyes.
I can understand highlights being incredibly hard of impossible, but having the center of the spiral appear where their iris was will I think make it look a lot more professional.
Thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean, but, like you said, tracking or highlighting stuff is really difficult (you won't see that on the rest of the pictures from this set either). And while I honestly like the way I do spiral eyes already I promise I'll try different in the future. Thanks again!
But on the topic of the animation's loop, consider repeating the final frames of your animations for half a minute. The "entranced" animations are just as- if not more sexy than the falling under. Try going deeper. <3!
I agree with Relanor a little bit, 30 extra seconds seems like a bit but the frames of when the spirals start and she's hypnotized could be a little longer, like maybe half that time would be good, just trying to help with the tips. Btw when do you usually post?
Relanor said: The new spirals are getting a ton better!
But on the topic of the animation's loop, consider repeating the final frames of your animations for half a minute. The "entranced" animations are just as- if not more sexy than the falling under. Try going deeper. <3!
animelover489 said: I agree with Relanor a little bit, 30 extra seconds seems like a bit but the frames of when the spirals start and she's hypnotized could be a little longer, like maybe half that time would be good, just trying to help with the tips. Btw when do you usually post?
I agree with you guys, but the problem is that file sizes and rendering times are a legitimate concern, another 15 seconds seem trivial but that's a whole other hour for my PC to render it, in which it is mostly out of commission, and double the time it would take to load on the Hub. Speaking of commissions I have set times I have to establish, if I were to render another 15 seconds I'd have to charge more, and that's understandably not great is it?
While I hear you and appreciate the feedback I try to stick with what the commissioner wants, in this case he was more interested in the process than in the end state.
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Because these are fantastic.
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HIGH(ER) QUALITY MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE IN SOURCE
New requests are closed (working on them!)
Commission slots are filled (if you contacted me already then you're good)
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damn, that looks good.
Thanks!
Love it... now how would i message you if i wanted to do a commission? And yes, I know your full. It’s for when you’re not.
Message me right here on the Hub!
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The way you do spirals in the eyes. It's always flat and originating from the dead center of the eye, even if the character was just a second ago looking to the side with highlights in their eyes.
I can understand highlights being incredibly hard of impossible, but having the center of the spiral appear where their iris was will I think make it look a lot more professional.
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So while I really love your work, I have one issue with it that hasn't been looking to fix itself. So, literally my only complaint.
The way you do spirals in the eyes. It's always flat and originating from the dead center of the eye, even if the character was just a second ago looking to the side with highlights in their eyes.
I can understand highlights being incredibly hard of impossible, but having the center of the spiral appear where their iris was will I think make it look a lot more professional.
Thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean, but, like you said, tracking or highlighting stuff is really difficult (you won't see that on the rest of the pictures from this set either). And while I honestly like the way I do spiral eyes already I promise I'll try different in the future. Thanks again!
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But on the topic of the animation's loop, consider repeating the final frames of your animations for half a minute. The "entranced" animations are just as- if not more sexy than the falling under. Try going deeper. <3!
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The new spirals are getting a ton better!
But on the topic of the animation's loop, consider repeating the final frames of your animations for half a minute. The "entranced" animations are just as- if not more sexy than the falling under. Try going deeper. <3!
I agree with Relanor a little bit, 30 extra seconds seems like a bit but the frames of when the spirals start and she's hypnotized could be a little longer, like maybe half that time would be good, just trying to help with the tips. Btw when do you usually post?
I agree with you guys, but the problem is that file sizes and rendering times are a legitimate concern, another 15 seconds seem trivial but that's a whole other hour for my PC to render it, in which it is mostly out of commission, and double the time it would take to load on the Hub. Speaking of commissions I have set times I have to establish, if I were to render another 15 seconds I'd have to charge more, and that's understandably not great is it?
While I hear you and appreciate the feedback I try to stick with what the commissioner wants, in this case he was more interested in the process than in the end state.
Also, I usually post around this time.