This marks the last update I've finished for D.Va's Awakening. After this, I have a short update for The Bunny Game, and then some original stuff. After that, I think I'll end up taking another short break, as my schedule is again heating up and I won't have much free time.
TheModrenMan said: This marks the last update I've finished for D.Va's Awakening. After this, I have a short update for The Bunny Game, and then some original stuff. After that, I think I'll end up taking another short break, as my schedule is again heating up and I won't have much free time.
Yeah. Gonna have to agree with the guy on the previous post in this. This no longer feels like a coherent story about Sombra dominating D.Va and instead feels like a bunch of unconnected snapshots of a kinky couple's life.
EoD said: Yeah. Gonna have to agree with the guy on the previous post in this. This no longer feels like a coherent story about Sombra dominating D.Va and instead feels like a bunch of unconnected snapshots of a kinky couple's life.
I didn't really intend for it to be one continuous story. I always planned it as more of a loosely-connected scenes with occasional arcs in-between that have a more concrete story. For example, the first several parts all had a pretty straightforward progression, but after D.Va gets to Sombra's place, each part becomes more standalone.
This isn't a particularly new thing for Hypnohub stories - Skypenotized has pretty much the same structure, for example. And it's especially prevalent in manip stories because you're at the mercy of whatever artwork you can find. I could probably write traditional story with this same premise, but I'd be shit out of luck if I couldn't find any images to go along with it.
So rather than try and find images that suit a story I've created, I write stories based on images that I find. Yeah, that leads to things being pretty disconnected, but I don't see that as necessarily a bad thing.
TheModrenMan said: I didn't really intend for it to be one continuous story. I always planned it as more of a loosely-connected scenes with occasional arcs in-between that have a more concrete story. For example, the first several parts all had a pretty straightforward progression, but after D.Va gets to Sombra's place, each part becomes more standalone.
This isn't a particularly new thing for Hypnohub stories - Skypenotized has pretty much the same structure, for example. And it's especially prevalent in manip stories because you're at the mercy of whatever artwork you can find. I could probably write traditional story with this same premise, but I'd be shit out of luck if I couldn't find any images to go along with it.
So rather than try and find images that suit a story I've created, I write stories based on images that I find. Yeah, that leads to things being pretty disconnected, but I don't see that as necessarily a bad thing.
Never said it was a bad thing, it just felt like a jarring change in the narrative
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This marks the last update I've finished for D.Va's Awakening. After this, I have a short update for The Bunny Game, and then some original stuff. After that, I think I'll end up taking another short break, as my schedule is again heating up and I won't have much free time.
More Bunny Game? Be still my beating heart!
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Yeah. Gonna have to agree with the guy on the previous post in this. This no longer feels like a coherent story about Sombra dominating D.Va and instead feels like a bunch of unconnected snapshots of a kinky couple's life.
I didn't really intend for it to be one continuous story. I always planned it as more of a loosely-connected scenes with occasional arcs in-between that have a more concrete story. For example, the first several parts all had a pretty straightforward progression, but after D.Va gets to Sombra's place, each part becomes more standalone.
This isn't a particularly new thing for Hypnohub stories - Skypenotized has pretty much the same structure, for example. And it's especially prevalent in manip stories because you're at the mercy of whatever artwork you can find. I could probably write traditional story with this same premise, but I'd be shit out of luck if I couldn't find any images to go along with it.
So rather than try and find images that suit a story I've created, I write stories based on images that I find. Yeah, that leads to things being pretty disconnected, but I don't see that as necessarily a bad thing.
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I didn't really intend for it to be one continuous story. I always planned it as more of a loosely-connected scenes with occasional arcs in-between that have a more concrete story. For example, the first several parts all had a pretty straightforward progression, but after D.Va gets to Sombra's place, each part becomes more standalone.
This isn't a particularly new thing for Hypnohub stories - Skypenotized has pretty much the same structure, for example. And it's especially prevalent in manip stories because you're at the mercy of whatever artwork you can find. I could probably write traditional story with this same premise, but I'd be shit out of luck if I couldn't find any images to go along with it.
So rather than try and find images that suit a story I've created, I write stories based on images that I find. Yeah, that leads to things being pretty disconnected, but I don't see that as necessarily a bad thing.
Never said it was a bad thing, it just felt like a jarring change in the narrative