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Amazingbrahjr
>> #311719
Posted on 2019-03-30 02:17:49
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chapter 14 start & end


Amazingbrahjr
>> #311720
Posted on 2019-03-30 02:19:54
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also my opinion on this chapter

this one feels lack luster in the mind control santa girl department

Amazingbrahjr
>> #311721
Posted on 2019-03-30 02:21:37
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but it is a set up in to the next chapter which is the longest chapter in this story

ghost13
>> #311752
Posted on 2019-03-30 05:01:07
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Is it strange that I find it humorous how she turned herself and her best friend into her cousin's slave girls by what amounts to an accident?

Amazingbrahjr
>> #311767
Posted on 2019-03-30 06:17:22
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ghost13 said:
Is it strange that I find it humorous how she turned herself and her best friend into her cousin's slave girls by what amounts to an accident?


not at all i too find it some what humorous

darsh
>> #312042
Posted on 2019-03-31 17:59:52
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ghost13 said:
Is it strange that I find it humorous how she turned herself and her best friend into her cousin's slave girls by what amounts to an accident?

Agreed, although I find Nanami and Mayumi's situation even more hilarious. IF you haven't seen that translation yet, I completed it some time yesteday. It's a few back in the pool. Basically, the mom buys the "doll-making kit" for her daughter to give to a boy she has a crush on. It gets delivered to the mother (because she bought it), and the system doesn't realize that she's not the one it's supposed to brainwash until it has already done so.

And just picture the recipient: it's weird enough to suddenly own a distant cousin and her best friend. It's quite another to suddenly own a classmate and her mother!

laststand0810
>> #312049
Posted on 2019-03-31 18:53:51
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darsh said:
Agreed, although I find Nanami and Mayumi's situation even more hilarious. IF you haven't seen that translation yet, I completed it some time yesteday. It's a few back in the pool. Basically, the mom buys the "doll-making kit" for her daughter to give to a boy she has a crush on. It gets delivered to the mother (because she bought it), and the system doesn't realize that she's not the one it's supposed to brainwash until it has already done so.

And just picture the recipient: it's weird enough to suddenly own a distant cousin and her best friend. It's quite another to suddenly own a classmate and her mother!


I believe it was because Mayumi want to check the package beforehand (for she's a mother obviously, who would want something so vague be handled by their children), not knowing what lies behind the parcel

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