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HeavyWeaponsGuy
>> #329810
Posted on 2019-08-06 22:30:17
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Beautiful.

Niyebe
>> #329816
Posted on 2019-08-07 00:27:59
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I hate being the one to points these things out, but did you mean to write “You are my owner, whom must...”

COINCIDENCE?
>> #329827
Posted on 2019-08-07 01:34:32
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Niyebe said:
I hate being the one to points these things out, but did you mean to write “You are my owner, whom must...”


Doug Dimma Darnit you could've just got off on it like the rest of us

TheGrandOleRuski
>> #329841
Posted on 2019-08-07 03:16:46
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This is really good! I'd love to read a proper ero-fic based on this. :)

ghost13
>> #329844
Posted on 2019-08-07 03:33:08
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HeavyWeaponsGuy said:
Beautiful.


Glad to hear!

Niyebe said:
I hate being the one to points these things out, but did you mean to write “You are my owner, whom must...”


COINCIDENCE? said:
Doug Dimma Darnit you could've just got off on it like the rest of us


No no, I appreciate when people point out these errors to me. Shows that they care and motivates me to try and be more thorough.

TheGrandOleRuski said:
This is really good! I'd love to read a proper ero-fic based on this. :)


...We'll see.

Niyebe
>> #329903
Posted on 2019-08-07 09:11:11
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COINCIDENCE? said:
Doug Dimma Darnit you could've just got off on it like the rest of us


Usually I notice these things because I’m constantly rereading these things. I end up reading it enough to noice the errors.

ghost13 said:
No no, I appreciate when people point out these errors to me. Shows that they care and motivates me to try and be more thorough.


Thanks for saying that. I really do enjoy these things and like I said earlier it’s because I reread these things a lot that I end up spotting the occasional error.

TheGrandOleRuski
>> #330018
Posted on 2019-08-08 04:49:28
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:D

Lol, but yeah, if you do or know someone who could it'd be awesome. Just a thought.

(Would've included the quote but I'm missing something clearly, sorry!)

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