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RingedVictor
>> #352402
Posted on 2020-01-18 03:10:34
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My first manip with heaps of help and support from OppaiObssession.

Blastman
>> #352404
Posted on 2020-01-18 03:29:43
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It's a little hard to read, but the story itself is really enjoyable!

Posted on 2020-01-18 03:34:06
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RingedVictor said:
My first manip with heaps of help and support from OppaiObssession.


Do not tag yourself as an artist without clarifying thag you’re a manipper.

skullman2033
>> #352407
Posted on 2020-01-18 04:08:26
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oh hey i just started playing FEH. it's nice to see kiran on this

pokemongirl
>> #352422
Posted on 2020-01-18 05:12:19
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Big Melons~

sleeperhit
>> #352423
Posted on 2020-01-18 05:27:33
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pokemongirl said:
Big Melons~


So I got dis new anime plot. So there's this high school girl, except she's got HUGE boobs. I mean some SERIOUS honkers.
*motions for everyone else to pick up where I left off*

Bloodly
>> #352430
Posted on 2020-01-18 06:32:44
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sleeperhit said:
So I got dis new anime plot. So there's this high school girl, except she's got HUGE boobs. I mean some SERIOUS honkers.
*motions for everyone else to pick up where I left off*


'Blue Eyes' took this and ran with it for months(years?), introducing friends, mothers and the like, all with vast....size.

Thornboi
>> #352436
Posted on 2020-01-18 07:51:56
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didn't realize that the text was meant to be read back and forth. at first glance i just assumed it was 2 pages of text to be read like a book. having a different text color or background color can help readers quickly identify when there is a back and forth type of dialogue, something to think about in the future :)

OppaiObssession
>> #352447
Posted on 2020-01-18 08:26:23
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Thornboi said:
didn't realize that the text was meant to be read back and forth. at first glance i just assumed it was 2 pages of text to be read like a book. having a different text color or background color can help readers quickly identify when there is a back and forth type of dialogue, something to think about in the future :)


Yeah that one's on me. He originally had that but I didn't catch it when he edited some stuff.

OverlordMiles
>> #352464
Posted on 2020-01-18 13:03:11
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Very well done. The dialogue from the sub was fresh and kind of felt like subliminal as I was reading it. Keep up the good work!

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