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>> #354950
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If you don't mind some negative feedback: - Her jaw line shifts too startlingly between images, in ways that cannot be fully explained with perspective and her changing expressions. It could use to be more consistent.
- On the last panel, her left breast doesn't rest naturally on the inner side. It makes it look like a botched boobjob.
- The fingers are too indistinct in comparison to the rest of the image. It's a matter of cohesion; There is nothing wrong with the style, but it doesn't match the rest.
Otherwise, downright beautiful, and I look forward to more <3 It's miles above the days when you started out.
Hope we are going to see more of these kinds of nice bodies in your series, too!
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>> #361933
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Wait... in the reset... did her heart etc stop pumping?
No, she just was brainwashed.
Also, the character is from a kisekae comic where she's a kind of cyborg.
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No, she just was brainwashed.
Also, the character is from a kisekae comic where she's a kind of cyborg.
correction she's just a human with chip implant, i don't think that's enough to classify as a cyborg