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Imasuky
>> #374023
Posted on 2020-06-14 18:19:35
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awesome

TheKinkyFinn
>> #374024
Posted on 2020-06-14 18:19:45
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Template by @lagergoaty, as stolen and ruined by an objectively worse artist.

As always, feedback welcome.

Tracer714
>> #374026
Posted on 2020-06-14 18:59:59
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I think this should be tagged with hypnotic penis

Posted on 2020-06-14 19:54:56
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TheKinkyFinn said:
Template by @lagergoaty, as stolen and ruined by an objectively worse artist.

As always, feedback welcome.


For feedback, gonna be honest at this point: The self-deprecation can really be a bit much. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely understand having a lot of self-doubt when it comes to creating art, and especially posting it publicly. I can't argue against you having that feeling, as I feel the same way constantly with my art.

Though that being said, I think you can tone down the harsh language a bit with every comment. Publicly calling your art awful and shitty, calling yourself a worse artist or an embarrassment, that kind of stuff doesn't really seem all that productive, at least to me. I'm all for seeing you continue to improve, and it's worth recognizing that you've definitely come a long way. So really, I would suggest asking for feedback in specific areas (such as posing, expressions, lineart, colors, etc), that way we can give direct suggestions vs simply disagreeing with the harsh self-deprication.

For actual feedback with this pic, only thing I could think of off top my head is having the lips a tad bit more pronounced. Not to be super prominent like bimbo lips, though having em be there to sort of add onto the fellatio as a nice little detail.

pokemongirl
>> #374049
Posted on 2020-06-14 20:33:43
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Lovely and gosh I really wana to suck a hypno cock right now *drools*

TheKinkyFinn
>> #374056
Posted on 2020-06-14 21:09:35
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
For feedback, gonna be honest at this point: The self-deprecation can really be a bit much. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely understand having a lot of self-doubt when it comes to creating art, and especially posting it publicly. I can't argue against you having that feeling, as I feel the same way constantly with my art.

Though that being said, I think you can tone down the harsh language a bit with every comment. Publicly calling your art awful and shitty, calling yourself a worse artist or an embarrassment, that kind of stuff doesn't really seem all that productive, at least to me. I'm all for seeing you continue to improve, and it's worth recognizing that you've definitely come a long way. So really, I would suggest asking for feedback in specific areas (such as posing, expressions, lineart, colors, etc), that way we can give direct suggestions vs simply disagreeing with the harsh self-deprication.


Sorry, but the self-beatings will continue until outcomes improve. Nothing is stopping you from pointing out any flaws or inadequacies in any or all of my work. I do what I can on every single line and stroke in every single picture, so if anything stands out, it's worth pointing out, no matter how insignificant or out of focus it may seem. If anything, I would prefer being overwhelmed with harsh critique on the various mistakes I am doubtless making, it helps redirect my attention towards them. That's the worst thing with evaluating my own work, it's actually hard to even tell where I'm going wrong, let alone how to fix it.

Posted on 2020-06-14 21:21:46
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TheKinkyFinn said:
Sorry, but the self-beatings will continue until outcomes improve. Nothing is stopping you from pointing out any flaws or inadequacies in any or all of my work. I do what I can on every single line and stroke in every single picture, so if anything stands out, it's worth pointing out, no matter how insignificant or out of focus it may seem. If anything, I would prefer being overwhelmed with harsh critique on the various mistakes I am doubtless making, it helps redirect my attention towards them. That's the worst thing with evaluating my own work, it's actually hard to even tell where I'm going wrong, let alone how to fix it.


Well yeah, I already gave a suggestion regardless of the self-beatings. The only other things I could think of are having the lineart for the ends of her hair not be so light (in contrast to the lineart for most of her body), and the little bubbles in the left middle part being more prominent.

lickitup
>> #374124
Posted on 2020-06-15 10:26:24
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Episode 1: The Phantom Penis

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